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mxrolkr June 10 2012, 16:10:20 UTC
Miranda/Andrea; from song "Hallelujah"

"you had your faith but you needed proof,
you saw her bathing on the roof,
her beauty in the moonlight over through ya.
She tied you to her kitchen chair,
she stole your throne and cut your hair
and from your lips she drew a hallelujah."

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little_lama June 11 2012, 21:23:00 UTC
Whoa, this is not an easy one. But I really like this idea.

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Hallelujah blue29 June 12 2012, 00:45:55 UTC
I really hope someone who can actually write tries this as it is an amazing concept. However here is my own effort as the idea just wouldn't leave me alone. Unfortunately a writer I am not ( ... )

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Re: Hallelujah mxrolkr June 12 2012, 04:16:52 UTC
I admit it's not what I was thinking, however it IS very good!!
Thank you for writing it. I hope more prompts inspire you!
Great Job!!

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Re: Hallelujah blue29 June 12 2012, 12:21:32 UTC
Thanks.

I'll admit it's not what came to mind first when I saw the prompt either, however it is what ended up on the page somehow.I'm not quite sure how. I really hope someone tackles this prompt.

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Re: Hallelujah little_lama June 12 2012, 21:17:47 UTC
Haha pretty good. I like the fact that it's a dark story, witch is closer to Cohen music. Like I said in a previous comment, not an easy prompt

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Re: Hallelujah blue29 June 12 2012, 21:28:39 UTC
Thanks. Cohen is the one I like the best.

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Re: Hallelujah jah728 June 17 2012, 20:36:26 UTC
Wow. Dark and intense.
Thanks for the read.

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