VOCALISE - CHAPTER 6

Dec 01, 2010 23:33

Title: Vocalise
Rating: PG13
Warning: Established character death. T__T
Pairing: Andy/Miranda
Length: 7400 words (this chapter)
Prompt: based on a prompt by amles80 
Summary: A/U - Miranda is a choral director and Andy is a journalist who enjoys singing. Miranda has a painful past and Andy has to learn to believe in herself. Miranda is 47, Andy is 26 in ( Read more... )

pairing: andy/miranda, genre: au, user: writtensword, all: fiction

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jintymac December 1 2010, 23:03:29 UTC
This is wonderful, I am loving this story more with each new update :D

The way you depicted the atmosphere of the concert and the emotional impact of it on the characters was amazing and very moving. Their first kiss was also a high point ;-)

I'm glad Miranda invited Andy to her parent's house for Christmas and that Andy made such a good impression on the family.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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writtensword December 2 2010, 07:54:17 UTC
thank you! ^_^

I'm glad it all came across... Sometimes I have the feeling that I trail off too much because I get so lost in the their moments... ^_^

The next 1000 words are already written and I will try to finish the next chapter before the weekend (depends on how busy I am)

Thank your for reading and leaving your feedback! :D

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kali_blue December 1 2010, 23:29:07 UTC
Truly touching how well Miranda's mom knows her. I loved the tenderness and transparency as well as the torment Miranda seems finally willing to lay aside.

“You brought Andrea here, because you felt like you needed our permission to have a shot at happiness, and because your heart is still so riddled with guilt that you don’t trust yourself to make the right decision.”

The hope in this chapter was palpable. Great update!

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writtensword December 2 2010, 07:57:06 UTC
Thank you!

Yes, I realise that sadly two pairs of accepting and understanding parents are not that realistic, but in this story, and especially for Miranda, her parents' support is one of the core pillars of why she's still around.

I'm happy that you liked this chapter! :D

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abina2810 December 1 2010, 23:47:33 UTC
Brought happy tears to my eyes. Lovely as alway. Cant wait for more. Thank you

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writtensword December 2 2010, 07:57:46 UTC
Thank you for your comment! I'm very glad you like it :D

Hope to have more before still before the weekend. ^_^

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anonymous December 2 2010, 00:02:21 UTC
Aww, I wanna have someone to hold feet with, too. That scene was just adorable.

And the chivalrous Andy... *melts into a puddle of goo on the floor*

Test passed, I'd say... It's nice how you made Miranda's parents so loving and accepting..

Thanks for another great chapter!

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ficburd December 2 2010, 00:05:44 UTC
Forgot to login before commenting. Durh! The brain has obviously already gone to bed.. which is where the body will now follow it ^^

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writtensword December 2 2010, 07:59:32 UTC
Good night! Or should I say 'good morning'? ^_^

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writtensword December 2 2010, 07:58:59 UTC
Teehee, yes, test pretty much passed, then again, what else would we expect of Andy anyways? :)

I'm happy you like it! :D

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perks123 December 2 2010, 00:16:40 UTC
What a wonderful chapter! So happy to see that Miranda finally understands that she is just as deserving of happiness as anyone else.

Thank you for writing this.

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writtensword December 2 2010, 08:01:02 UTC
Aww, thanks! And it's all my pleasure. I'm along for the ride just like anyone else. The story basically writes itself ^_^, I just need to put the words into notepad xD

I'm glad to know that you enjoyed it! :D

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