Vocalise - Chapter 2

Nov 19, 2010 14:03

Title: Vocalise
Rating: PG13
Warning: Established character death. T__T
Pairing: Andy/Miranda
Length: 3000 words (this chapter)
Prompt: based on a prompt by amles80 
Summary: A/U - Miranda is a choral director and Andy is a journalist who enjoys singing. Miranda has a painful past and Andy has to learn to believe in herself. Miranda is 47, Andy is 26 in ( Read more... )

pairing: andy/miranda, genre: au, user: writtensword, all: fiction

Leave a comment

Comments 24

jintymac November 19 2010, 13:16:21 UTC
This story is so wonderful and very moving. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go next ;-)

Reply

writtensword November 19 2010, 13:41:00 UTC
Thank you! ^_^

I have some ideas and so many scenes spooking around in my head already. ^_^ will need to make sure I place them at the appropriate moments and not rush too fast... :D

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

Reply


avenavs November 19 2010, 13:23:54 UTC
If I were Andy I'd freeze instead of sing. I mean...uhm...Miranda...hands...tummy...*brain shuts down*

And I want to hug Miranda now. T_________T sad ending.

now,now, where's my fluff?!

Reply

writtensword November 19 2010, 13:42:54 UTC
The fluff will come! I promise!

And yeah I'd probably die of a heart attack if Miranda were to do that to me.

It worked for Andy, though, something inside her snapped open at that moment ^_^

I was crying when I wrote the cemetary bit. Poor Miranda, I feel so bad for her... I know it's me doing it, but you know... the story kind of presented itself... :3

I blame the plotbunnies!

Reply


xenavirgin November 19 2010, 14:03:09 UTC
Marvelous! Absolutely Marvelous! You are painting a wonderfully rich and moving tale and I am truly captivated. I truly enjoy your writing style, it really captures the reader and lets them flow with the story. Nicely done our kid. :-)

Reply

writtensword November 19 2010, 14:33:32 UTC
Aww, thank you! ^_^

I'm very happy to hear the effect my writing has. :D

I hope people won't be left too sad after this. :3 I just really wanted to show how Miranda feels, and in what kind of place she was, and is now, so she can move on and find a new place for herself :)

Thank you for your kind comment!! <3

Reply


pure_ecstasy6 November 19 2010, 15:42:12 UTC
I always get excited when I see you have update!
This was a really good, but sad, chapter. I liked the start with the interaction between Andy and Miranda with Miranda touching Andy's shoulders and then stomach. Surprised that Andy even managed to continue singing after feeling Miranda's hands on her haha! :p The ending was sad though. I'm curious to find out what happened? I hope Miranda is able to confide in Andy or something..
I'm very interested to see where you're gonna take these two in this very brilliant story.

Reply

writtensword November 19 2010, 21:42:04 UTC
The story of what happened will be told soon!

It will be a journey from the dark into the light. A story of finding happiness again. I mean, I guess that's kind of obvious with me being the crazy nut who writes it ^_^

I'm so glad you like this story! Thanks for reading!^_^

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

writtensword November 19 2010, 21:42:43 UTC
*hands you a tissue*

sooowweee! T___T

Stick around! I promise it will get better! ^_^

Reply


Leave a comment

Up