Drabble(s): On Death and Dying

Nov 23, 2009 23:51

Title: On Death and Dying
Fandom: Doctor Who
Spoilers: Waters of Mars
Rating: None
Word count: 5 drabbles with 100 words each. I win.
Notes: Nothing special, really, trying to make some sort of sense of Waters of Mars, I came back to a fic idea I've had for ages: The Doctor vs. the Five Stages of Grief. Unbetaed (and written in a hurry as I was ( Read more... )

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dune_drd November 28 2009, 20:18:32 UTC
Thank you so much! *squishes you*

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aeron_lanart November 24 2009, 00:46:10 UTC
Oh my. There are not enough words to tell you the buttons this is hitting. Brilliant. Beautiful. Painful. Fantastic...

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dune_drd November 28 2009, 20:19:19 UTC
And suddenly, Waters of Mars makes some sort of sense to me - thanks for reading!

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wendymr November 24 2009, 01:18:22 UTC
These are really, really good. And I love the use of the stages of grief, as well. Very nicely done!

I think this is the line that really resonated with me:

Time always wins, his teachers' voices whisper in his mind as he watches snowflakes hurtling around an empty space where an Ood stood just a moment ago, like a warning from his own future.

So true for him - and then that final drabble is such a perfect finish. Great work!

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dune_drd November 28 2009, 20:20:12 UTC
Thank you so much!

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unfeathered November 24 2009, 09:41:41 UTC
Oh, lovely. I love the idea of the Doctor, in the end, getting tired of running.

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dune_drd November 28 2009, 20:20:53 UTC
It would be the ultimate end for Ten, wouldn't it? Thanks for reading

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yamx November 24 2009, 13:02:53 UTC
This is beautifully done. Showing the events of WoM as the Doctor finally working through his grief from the Time War, after being stuck in the denial stage for years, makes so much sense.

Let's hope that he'll find some piece before he - this him - dies.

Thank you for sharing.

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dune_drd November 28 2009, 20:22:19 UTC
It's scary how good the stages of grief thing works, isn't iz? Thanks for commenting!

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