NC-17 | Such a Beautiful Mess That's Breaking My Skin

[dugindeep]

Title: Such a Beautiful Mess That's Breaking My Skin
Rating: NC-17
Characters: J2, mentions of Jensen/Danneel and Jared/Genevieve
Words: 4,200
Warnings: Angst Level Orange
Summary: Jensen didn't have a chance to tell Jared before he asked her, and Jared crumbles under the whole thing.
Notes: A) Danneel is gorgeous. B) They are gonna make the most

Comments

[dugindeep]

Aww, thank you dear! I'm glad you liked that passage. It kinda hurt to write it. :(

[coyotesuspect]

Excellent job. <3

[dugindeep]

Thank you so much bb!!!

&hearts

[bekkis]

His voice is quiet but it still slips out, “Didn’t think you’d give it to her.” Never thought you would.

“Well it wasn’t gonna fit on your finger,” he kids.

Jared looks up, first time he really looks at Jensen since he came back. Since he came back engaged and taken and real. This thing had never been real, and now he’s wrecked. He’s back to focusing on the grill, shuffles the meat off onto a serving platter then nudges it across the sidetray, closer to Jensen. “A little dry, but you know,” he says a little too easily. Like you like it.

Oh man, that whole section is like a punch in the gut. Jensen trying to joke around even though he's serious and how Jared reacts. Especially the "like you like it" line. Oh boys:(

[dugindeep]

Oh boys indeed :(

Thank you for the comment and for reading! This whole thing was hard to write. I was getting all angsty myself. Hah.

[dugindeep]

Thank you dear.

[passing_through]

Jared wraps himself in that feeling, of Jensen wrapped around him, still in him, and for the moment, with him.

Oh wow. This is just heartbreaking. Beautifully done.

[dugindeep]

Thank you so much!