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R | Twinkies, and Pizza, and Red Ropes, Oh My!

Oct 20, 2009 14:40

Title: Twinkies, and Pizza, and Red Ropes, Oh My!
Rating: R - language and barely-sex
Summary: They've been together five years now, friends for a total of ten, but there are still some things they can't agree on.
Notes: Um, lame, but I made a minor change to the title. And, uh, apologies to the 'kid' in here for making him a delinquent. This wasn ( Read more... )

.non-au, verse: animals, .fic, j2

Comments 33

corbyinoz October 20 2009, 20:58:29 UTC

Really good, hon. This was a terrific little story. All these - they're jewels, beautifully crafted and revealing so much in a small package.

dugindeep October 20 2009, 22:01:10 UTC

Thank you!! The more I read over it the more I get tied up in the angst, then smirk at the goofiness. I'm glad you liked it :-D

13chapters October 20 2009, 21:04:05 UTC

THIS IS TOO ADORABLE. MY BRAIN IS ALL MELTY FROM HOW ADORABLE AND SCHMOOPY THIS IS. CAN'T STOP CAPSLOCKING. JARED IS THE WORST INFLUENCE IN THE WORLD, BUT WILL MAKE THE BEST DADDY. JENSEN WILL BE THE MOM. LIKE WHEN I WAS A KID AND MY DAD WOULD BUY A WHOLE BOX OF MILKY WAYS AT COSTCO AND MY MOM WOULD BE LIKE "WHAT ON EARTH DID YOU BUY?" AND MY DAD WOULD LOOK STARTLED AT HER OBJECTION TO HIM BRINGING HOME 24 FULL SIZED CANDY BARS. AND THIS IS WHY MY DAD IS AWESOME. (ALSO, HE DOESN'T SEND ME PASSIVE AGGRESSIVE EMAILS OR MESSAGES ON FACEBOOK.)

dugindeep October 20 2009, 22:02:11 UTC

HAAHAHAHA OH MY BB I'M SO SORRY ABOUT THE PASSIVE AGGRESSION, BUT IT CRACKS ME UP.

I'm so glad you liked this and weren't weirded out by Little Sam. And THANK YOU for even talking about it with me last week.

lovetheguys October 20 2009, 21:07:35 UTC

This story is so delightful and gorgeously written, I want to marry it!

Preacher, please?

Love, Robin

dugindeep October 20 2009, 22:02:37 UTC

HAHA awesome. Thank you so much! Marry away, as long as I can be there.

neros_violin October 20 2009, 21:13:25 UTC

You'll have to excuse any incoherence - my brain has exploded from the wonderful that is this fic. There were so many lines of laugh out loud dialogue, so many perfect examples of a great relationship (communication, understanding, compromise, playfulness, balance), so many touches of lovely Jared and Jensen characterization. And seventeen year old Colin was AWESOME!

dugindeep October 20 2009, 22:03:31 UTC

Awww, thank you so much!! When it was getting angsty, I tried to bring more humor back to balance it all out. So I'm glad you found many different feelings in there, especially in their relationship.

And yes, 17-year-old Colin is awesome. I bet I'm the first one to write him asking for a beer. I break grounds, bb.

neros_violin October 20 2009, 22:07:22 UTC

I break grounds, bb.

Hells to the yeah!

Seriously, you really do. I love how varied your writing is, and how you're always surprising and delighting me. :)

dugindeep October 20 2009, 22:09:55 UTC

Awwwww, shucks, honey. Thank you! :-D

moodswingers October 20 2009, 23:49:20 UTC

akjfghjkasfhdgjahf I LOOOOOVE THIS. I love it that Colin is not little anymore, and that Jared would be an irresponsible parent and that Jensen wants the baby to have their genes, and everything. AWESOME.

dugindeep October 20 2009, 23:51:52 UTC

OMG Thank you BB! I love that you love it so much and that older!Colin works, because I started freaking out over it while, right now, he's Precious Weechester.