R | You Arrested My Mind | SPN Gen

Oct 03, 2009 12:25

Title: You Arrested My Mind
Words: 2,000ish
Rating: Light R - one curse word
Warning: References things up to Ep 5.04
Summary: Sam sees himself in 2014.
Notes: Title and cut text from Gavin DeGraw’s “Belief,” which was on repeat through most of this.

In the form of your body, with the wrath of a god )

.spn tag, .spn, .fic

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timehasa_way October 3 2009, 17:33:24 UTC
Oooooh, my God. This is...beautiful, and sad, and angsty, and...pretty much just what I pictured would happen. Oh, Sammy.

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dugindeep October 3 2009, 17:51:37 UTC
See, I just beat Sammy up emotionally :-D

&hearts

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countess7 October 3 2009, 18:00:08 UTC
ohhhhh, my goodness. this was creepy and eerie and HEARTBREAKING!

i'm so glad you wrote this! i wanted more *sam* in the episode, even though i loved dean something awful, and this really made up the lack.

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dugindeep October 3 2009, 19:35:19 UTC
Thank you bb!

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bekkis October 3 2009, 18:01:30 UTC
Awwww, Sam. I love the idea that Lucifer did the same thing with Sam; I really like what you did with it:)

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dugindeep October 3 2009, 19:37:17 UTC
Thank you :)

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13chapters October 3 2009, 18:16:45 UTC
“You couldn’t see the real darkness before. When our father abandoned us. Left us with a cursed world. I’m just trying to do what he couldn’t. What he wouldn’t. To clean it up.”

*cries*

I've just been thinking about how if the devil really wanted to appear as sympathetic as possible to people, it's hard to do better than to take the appearance of Sam Winchester. Satanic dewy sensitive eyes. OMG. Humanity wouldn't stand a chance.

Anyway, I love this. Poor Sammy-Sam. This season is already killing me.

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dugindeep October 3 2009, 19:40:13 UTC
I was depressing myself with all that Lucifer was saying :(

Thank you honey.

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zubeneschamali October 3 2009, 18:19:50 UTC
Wow, this really feels like a set of scenes that got cut from the final version. You captured exactly how Lucifer would talk to Sam, and of course Sam had to ask Dean to keep his promise yet again, and of course Dean would refuse and look for another way out. Really nice tag.

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dugindeep October 3 2009, 18:36:52 UTC
Thank you so much!

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