Commentfics!

Apr 19, 2011 10:09

Today is a surprisingly light day. I've had my morning coffee. And am in a delightfully wonderful mood, so ... I wanna timestamp, just short commentfics.

Promt me a few words and a verse from here.

List of commentfics here! )

comment!fic, cops and robbers, gooooooooooooooooal!, this is not the world we know, jensen/danneel/jared, copfic, surprisingly i write het, awesome threesome, the way to really fly, faraway land, secret agent man, high school for evah, 100 days and messes

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Nice choice ;-) dugindeep April 19 2011, 17:27:01 UTC
“I think we need a bigger tub,” Danneel says.

“Nonsense,” Jared smiles from the other end of the bath, pulling her foot to his chest as he massages it. She sighs softly as he rubs his thumbs into her arch and then she flexes her foot with his fingers pressing across her toes.

“Jensen isn’t gonna fit,” she murmurs, eyelids dropping shut as she slides deeper into the water.

Bubbles now cover her breasts, which he’d been eyeing for how slick the skin was and how pert her nipples became the second he started massaging her foot. But the pure bliss on her face, plump bottom lip caught between her teeth as she arches her back and presses her head into the back of the tub, makes it all better.

Jared playfully bites at the edge of arch, eliciting a tiny shriek and a playfully hard look from her. “We’ll make room.”

“You better,” Jensen says as he enters the bathroom, just a pair of smooth cotton pants barely hanging at his hips.

Danneel warmly smiles. “There’s my favorite guy.”

“By the looks of things, you might have a new one,” Jensen chuckles, nodding at them in the tub.

“C’mon, take those off and join us,” she insists, holding her hand out.

“Yeah, Jensen, take off your pants,” Jared taunts.

Jensen lifts an eyebrow as he tucks his thumbs inside the waistband of his pajamas. “You act like I have shame with you two.”

“Someone ought to,” Jared grins. He reaches out, fingers snagging just enough of Jensen’s pants to tug. “Lose the clothes and gain some friends.”

Doing as he’s told, Jensen pushes the pants over his hips and they slink to the floor. As he steps up to the tub, intent to move in behind Danneel, Jared slides fingers over the bit of thigh he can reach and they smile at each other. “You’ll get your chance,” Jensen tells him just before leaning in to kiss Danneel.

Once settled behind her, Jensen strokes his palms over her belly. Just as one hand slips down to her pussy and the other up to her breast, she drops a little lower in the water and rubs her foot along Jared’s thigh. Jared pulls at both her feet, spreading her legs as much as possible in the tub that really doesn’t fit them at all, except that by now they have little want for personal space and exist within each other’s.

Jared can’t do anything but run his thumbs at the underside of her feet and zero in on the way she starts to writhe, gently sloshing water up the sides of the tub as Jensen’s now fingering her in earnest. Jensen kisses along the length of her neck but keeps his eyes right on Jared, and Jared smiles in return, lips hitching up as he enjoys the view. Even though Danneel’s hidden, he happily accepts the wicked look Jensen shoots him as she starts moaning and arching her back, murmuring both their names until finally she releases a high whine and twists against Jensen as she comes.

Feeling his chest tighten at the way Danneel lazily smiles and her eyes glaze over when she looks at him, Jared breathes deeply to relieve the pressure. He wants to jump across the tub and take her, bring her off again, or even assault Jensen with slick hands and quick movements.

It gets even harder to breathe when Jensen sucks at her earlobe, eyes still on Jared, and mumbles, “Who’s next?”

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Re: Nice choice ;-) mistyzeo April 19 2011, 20:32:34 UTC
unfffff just what i wanted. :D

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Re: Nice choice ;-) dugindeep April 19 2011, 20:44:32 UTC
:-D

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Re: Nice choice ;-) awen_1 March 18 2013, 21:06:18 UTC
nice...

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