R | After All It Was You and Me

Oct 01, 2010 09:52

Title: After All It Was You and Me
Words: 1,840
Rating/Warning: R/language
Summary: Sam's falling, when he's not tortured, until a hand reaches out.
NotesL 5.22 coda, so all those spoilers pertain to this. I wrote this soon after the one or two Dean-centric codas, back in May, then thought I lost it. Finally! I think it kind of works as a companion ( Read more... )

sam stop asking your brother to kill you, spn

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meesasometimes October 1 2010, 15:26:17 UTC
Each look and touch and knowing feeling

I'm pretty sure you just wrote slash. Whether you meant to or not;P

It needs a Subtle Wincest Warning. Excuse me, my slash goggles are steaming up. I'm sure it's just me.*shrug*

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dugindeep October 1 2010, 16:29:45 UTC
LOL I kind of figured people would feel slashy about this :-P

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grace_fully October 1 2010, 20:03:45 UTC
HAHA BRB LAUGHING SO HARD.

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embroiderama October 1 2010, 16:52:07 UTC
Oh, Sam. I love the details of this and the way you let us into Sam's head.

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dugindeep October 1 2010, 16:53:48 UTC
Thank you!

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earthquakedream October 1 2010, 17:32:24 UTC
this really works for me, especially with the premiere in mind. i'm kinda glad you "lost" this because it makes so much more sense now. it makes 6x01 make more sense. great job!

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dugindeep October 1 2010, 17:56:15 UTC
Funnily enough, the ending was finished in the last few days, so it became more about that, to make 6.01 make sense, hah.

But yay for working! <333

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big_heart_june October 1 2010, 17:37:08 UTC
Beautiful. just so beautiful as I absolutely knew it would be. Sam. gah. I love that it's always about the two of them:

Buoyed by fierce determination and the instinctive pull of Winchester to Winchester, Sam’s muscles bound together and let him rise, feet steady beneath him. “I want to see Dean.”

of course he does.*sigh* I also love and adore your rich detailed prose, it's really lovely. wow.

After a few tilts of his head, Chuck pressed his finger to Sam’s forehead, ethereal touch just a tickling sensation that crossed every barrier of Sam’s body - epidermis into muscle, ligaments to marrow, and out through his toes with a great illumination that blinded him.

Loved Chuck, loved him struggling with Sam the mammoth too! LOL.
This was love BB, but it makes me ache for Sam and for Dean and for all those lost memories. Damn. Boys ♥ YOU! ♥

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dugindeep October 1 2010, 17:58:13 UTC
Awww, bb!

I don't know why, but I love the idea of Chuck physically pulling Sam from Hell and all the craziness swarming Sam's brain over it. So I'm glad you loved him in this piece.

&hearts

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dugindeep October 1 2010, 19:08:17 UTC
LOL I can't believe I did it, either :-P Except I was going for a chorus of 522 codas (including Bobby and Lisa) and never got anything else going.

But thank you so much for the other comments! &hearts

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