NC-17 | Baby Come Around, Keep on Comin' Around

[dugindeep]

Title: Baby Come Around, Keep on Comin' Around
Rating: um, hard R, Light NC-17? Things of the sexual variety but not real graphic
Words: 3,200
Summary: After that one day in the bathroom, they only see each other at lunchtime. Jensen wants more.
Notes: Title from Marc Broussard's "Come Around." For logans_mom00 who so lovingly donated through help_haiti for fic. It's

Comments

[bekkis]

I really loved the style and the atmosphere of this one! I really enjoyed this!

[dugindeep]

Thank you bb!

[wendy]

But he flinches when Jared’s thumb grazes Jensen’s neck, grazes Jared’s mark, his brain corrects, and he relaxes at the small touch. “That looks pretty bad,” Jared says with a low chuckle.

He reaches up to rub at the spot and hides a tiny smile. “It felt pretty good. If that’s any consolation.”

“Pretty big consolation,” Jared returns as he hands Jensen’s beer over and then he’s going back to the group.

I find that whole scene just unbearably hot, I LOVE hickeys!

I love that last paragraph SO MUCH, it's the perfect ending to this. I love Jared coming into Jensen's room (at night!) and I love Jensen thinking about Jared's different kisses, I like how that idea hints at new intimacy versus just NOWNOWNOW.

[dugindeep]

I love the idea of Jared marking him :-D

Thanks bb! I, too, like the last few sections where they actually talk, and try to figure it all out.

[strangeallure]

This is great (and hot, too).

I really like how guy-ish your boys are and how much they suck at communication. They're harder to get/figure out than in a lot of J2 fic out there, and that makes it so interesting. It actually gets me excited to learn why they do what they do.

[dugindeep]

Thank youuuuu!

It sometimes bugs me when the boys are too schmoopy or just not realistically guyish in how they miscommunicate (or DON'T miscommunicate). In addition to it being a guy thing to do, people in general aren't that great at expressing issues and feelings. So thank you for acknowledging it here :-D

[big_heart_june]

Sleepy!Jensen is hot as hell...god I loved this, loved the slow build-up to this ending. Also LOVE Jared watching and as for marking Jensen up? just GAH.

Wonderful job! thanks so much ♥

[dugindeep]

&hearts

Excellent! Glad you liked the slow-build and the little touches, even when there's no blatant porn :-D

[big_heart_june]

Aaaah well I do love me some hot porn between these guys but something as well written and entertaining as this is just as satisfactory to me.

[toronja]

Oh, wonderful! Too tired for a proper comment, but I really enjoyed it :D

[dugindeep]

Thank you!