Eavesdropping Is Hard on the Heart by hannahcarrietta

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Title: Eavesdropping Is Hard on the Heart
Author: hannahcarrietta
Pairings: House/Chase
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,440
Author's Notes: I do not own House MD or have any claims on it if I did there would be a lot more slash and it would be called the House love Chase show. I am not writing this story for any type of profit. Please do not sue me as I am a poor

Comments

[janes_membrane]

I have nothing against MPreg. I’ve always given people who write for that genre more leeway in terms of creativity on how to go about it. I have to admit that when it comes to this genre and pairing, you seem to hold the record for having the most of them. And they're not bad. I do enjoy reading them. In fact I do go to your page to see if you have any more fics. (So do you?) I'm not quite sure if there was an explanation how the mpreg was made possible but if there isn't, well maybe you can work on something for that or have some sort of disclaimer for it if you want. Though that's not really a requirement, it's just a suggestion.

As for this fic, well I liked it. Though to be honest, the whole thing seemed to have happened rather quickly. Now it could be that you tried to fit what you had planned into just one fic or I just got used to your style of having many parts and you giving your readers a lot of details. But don't sweat it, it's no big.

As for grammar, I didn't really notice if you had anything against commas but I may need to reread your fic. What I did notice is that there are words or phrases there that is obvious that you meant to delete or update but seemed to have forgotten to do so. But that, of course, didn't deter me from reading you piece. Usually it's the abundance of bad spelling and wrong word usage that gets me to drop a fic but since that's not the case here, it wasn't a real big issue with me. Besides, commas are tricky.

If you want, I can do beta for you. I'm not promising miracles but I'll do my best. Heck, I'll even do some research on comma usage and see if we can get all of them right for your piece.

[hannahcarrietta]

Yes there is another fic up there now for my series... I have not been writing that much lately as I moved across the country again and had eye surgery. There should be more up soon!

Thanks for the support!

Yeah this story could have easily been a long series and may just yet be part of one.

Thanks for reading all my stories if you have an ideas (or questions about my universe) or stories that you would like to see drop me a line