#17. Perfection
#17. Perfection
Despite telling himself to go home over and over again, the lanky boy made his way towards the basketball court. His long time crush had told him that he decided to confess to Jonghyun. Oh, how Jinki wished that he was the lucky boy that Kibum loved. He sighed loudly, kicking the dry leaves on his way.
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Despite telling himself to go home over and over again, the lanky boy made his way towards the basketball court. His long time crush had told him that he decided to confess to Jonghyun. Oh, how Jinki wished that he was the lucky boy that Kibum loved. He sighed loudly, kicking the dry leaves on his way.
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Stupid dino Dx How can he reject someone as beautiful as Bummie?? *huggles Kibum* Poor baby, getting rejected~ Everything would be okay for him though, he'll have Jinki forever by his side~~ :DD I'm actually planning on writing a second part since people are asking for one and mainly because my lovely unniee wants one~ ^^ <333 And ONKEY FTW!!
IKR!! Jinki is just so so perfect~ Makes me love him more and more~~ He's just so cute and sweet, no one can beat him teehee~ Realized I suck at writing angst pieces... Must as well stick with fluff :|
AWWW UNNIEE *huggles* Thank you and ILYSFM :DD <333
Thanks for reading and commenting!!
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and happy belated birthday<33
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*waits with Jinki :))*
Have a nice day~~
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awwwhh jinki is just akshdaldksjalkfjalj seriously that boy is ♥
can i marry him can i can i? oh now... key will kill me >.< oh well..
jjong's a jerk. but he's a good jerk because now onkey can be together! \(^o^)/
“Although perfection doesn’t exist, you are perfect in my eyes.”
kibum is perfect :3
and i would give aslkjadj everything to have witnessed that scene *o*
one can only dream~
amazing fic bb!<3
yay 93-ers!!
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Why is Jinki so perfect?? He makes us speechless and incoherent when we think and talk... which is why I love him even more<33 I want to marry him tooo xDD Huuukk, Bummie is smacking me for making you want to marry Jinki instead o.o
*pats Jjong* He's a good man for putting Onkey together~! ^^
IKR! Kibum is perfect! Jonghyun is just too blind to see that...
I would honestly melt into a puddle if Jinki said that line to me... Like you said, one can only dream ;_____;
Thanks for reading and commenting!! :DD <3333
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and i wished you happy birthday too ):
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I swear I put your name in there too but it disappeared o.o I'm not lying here... T^T
Oh my gaud, I'm horribleeee *huggles you tightly* I'm so so sorry!!
I LOVE YOU A LOT DONGSAENGIEEEE :) <333
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okay anyways, it's alright about the name thing, really ^^ i see it there now! rofl. i was so horribly early in wishing you anyways xD gahhh, time difference sucks, unnie ):
moving on, this was so cute! as in the jinki spying on kibum and thinking kibum wouldn't see him part xD but seriously, a bright blue hoodie, jinki? gah i remembered you to be smarter :3 rofl. anyways, it was really cute how he consoles kibum! I DEMAND A SEQUEL UNNIEEEEEEEEEEE! one where they get together ^^
god, this is the first fluff that i've read in like, what, a few weeks >.> hahahaha okay i told you i avoid anything which is rated FLUFF under the genre. i practically run -__- god, everyone's seeing what a sadistic creep i am here ;__; but it was really nice and worth reading! see, told you i'd spot and read anything by you simply cause you're an awesome writer :D i think i ever told you that before xDokay i think ive ranted and ( ... )
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*smacks myself* Next time, I'm just going to spot you ^^ So you can take all your time to comment and then I would really remember to hound my lovely dongsaengie~ (Only if you want :DD) *huggle*
I do owe you 2 comments now! And I'm sorry for taking a while to comment~ Unnie had exams last 2 weeks so I was trying to stay off lj... which was fail since I was checking and spotting myself everywher :3
Jinki is just too cute for his own good~ From being dorky for spying and just dubu for his bright hoodie~ TOO CUTE! And to make my lovely dongsaengie even happier, I'M GOING TO WRITE A SEQUEL FOR THIS!! xDD Very very soon, since I'm on summer break~
Your comments always makes me so happy! *huggles* It makes me feel so happy that you read my fluff even though you don't really enjoy most of them~ >__< You're not a sadist creep~ You're my cute lovely dongsaengie~ <33 You're an awesome writer and an amazing dongsaengie~~ Though I said this before too, I'll just say it over and over again because its the truth ( ... )
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confess to kibum right now!!!!
sequel~~~~
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Jinki needs to toughen up and just confess ^^
Sequel... Maybe? Just for the confession... teehee~
Thanks for reading and commenting!! :D <33
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Jjong dino is bad here... *smacks him* He rejected the sexy beautiful Kibum and even hurt his feelings... HOW IS HE NOT PERFECT ENOUGH?!?! Stupid dino...
But then again, if he didn't reject him... No Onkey o.o
ONKET FTW!! <3333
Jinki really does need to confess to him RIGHT NOW. :X Come on, Bummie needs you to comfort him~ But technically, the last line... I kind of consider it as a shy 'implied' confession XD
Love you unniee~ Thanks for reading and commenting~~ <3333 :DD
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I'm planning to write a second part to this~~ Since some people are asking for one... and I personally want to write some fluff about Jinki confessing to Kibummie xDD
LOVE YOU TOO UNNIE!!
I'm an addict to SS501's Love ya .___. so gooooooooood
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