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An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 20.2 (20 of 35)

Jul 14, 2013 07:09

Title: An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 20.2
Author: dtstrainers
Paring: Donna Noble/Peter Carlisle
Co-Captain of this Ship: WhosInTheAttic- As always, eternal thanks.
Rating: Mature content, written by a decidedly immature fangirl
Word Count: 6,323
Summary: Donna exacts a bit of revenge for a comment Peter made. Peter doesn't seem to mind. Here's ( Read more... )

an officer and the noble woman, crossover, whosintheattic, fanfic, peter carlisle, donna noble, doctor who, blackpool

Comments 6

dm12 July 14 2013, 21:30:41 UTC

Ooh, I just knew the "quality" comment was going to make it into this story at some point! Well, it wasn't quite like this with the last set of quality handcuffs, now was it?

She really got him back for that comment about being tied down and getting the creative juices flowing. And no, after that, I don't think he'd ever regret saying that! Poor Donna, though, all flustered when she discovered that it was real handcuffs she used on him and not her toys. Peter, though, was all calm and I think that may have made her more nervous!

This was so much fun; I love it when they lose control like this!

tkel_paris July 15 2013, 04:37:24 UTC

*giggles* Oh, this was hot and lovely and all things nice and naughty. Figured he'd have the advantage even while restrained. Be still my beating heart. *fans self*

*snorts* That's my thought over her mistaking HIS for the toy ones. At least he kept calm, although I think it didn't help her much. But... I'm getting the feeling that he may turn the tables on her VERY soon. :DDDDDDD

saaammie July 15 2013, 10:12:19 UTC

LOL.
I should've known that was coming, and looking back, there were all these hints in the text, but I was too... busy to process them.

painted_dahlias July 19 2013, 06:06:51 UTC

So funny story. I kept seeing this fic all the time but I wasn't sure if I wanted to read it because I don't usually do crossovers. I ran out of other smut to read so I gave into reading this one. And I really like it? I ship this really hard. Not as hard as actual DoctorxDonna, but pretty close. It's really cute and I just want them to be happy together forever and ever and ever and ever... So, yeah. I really like your story and I'm gonna go hide now.

dtstrainers July 20 2013, 15:45:45 UTC

Oh, thank you so much for giving this a chance and especially for letting me know what you thought about it! There's some really good stuff out there, so I'm flattered that you took the time to read AOATNW. I sorta knew this story wasn't going to be terribly popular, as it's:
A) a crossover,
B) Rose isn't involved,
C) it's a WIP and finally,
D) it's not a quick read.

I just can't help it, though. Peter Carlisle and Donna Noble just seemed like such a perfect pairing to me: a woman with a mysterious past to intrigue the detective and a man willing to puzzle her out for the woman looking for what's missing in her life. I hear their dialog so clearly that I can't stop writing it.

Thanks again for the kind words, and to entice you out of hiding, I added a little something special at the end of part 21.1 that I posted this morning.

eloriekam August 27 2013, 00:14:17 UTC

Oooh handcuffs case? Maybe that means handcuffs? *tries not to pant pathetically*

Oh YES! Good on you, Donna. :D And I'd spring into action too with those words in that tone and accent directed at me!

Training exercises, is that what they call them now? ;)

he realized almost instantly things about herself that, until that very moment, she didn’t. This is good and true. They both have the skills to do so, but understandably in their own skins they're a little too close to see things about themselves. Each other, though, is fair game, and great fun ( ... )