A "forked" poem: And Fountains in the Midst of the Valleys

[dteleki]

The original-version poem-in-progress, in its current draft, is in ozarque's LiveJournal, here. This poem here is an "alternate-universe" version of that poem. In the Open Source movement for software development, this sort of thing is called a "fork" of the project.

This is my Draft #2, and corresponds to ozarque's Draft #10.

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My divergences from ozarque's original poem-in-progress

[dteleki]

I've started thinking that the poem is a bit too USA-centric; so I changed a few names and details in my "fork" to make it more "one-worldly". It didn't take much