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demotu October 14 2008, 21:36:03 UTC
I think the image of Jack blowing on a baby hamster because he wants to keep it alive is the best thing ever, with the possible exception of the rest of the chapter, especially Ianto's request in the very last scene.

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dsudis October 15 2008, 17:46:46 UTC
*grins*

Thank you! I think the thought of Jack blowing on a baby hamster may have been one of the things that convinced me that, yes, I really was going to add baby hamsters to this story.

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rexluscus October 14 2008, 22:56:59 UTC
This story is so fantastic. That's all. Okay, must keep reading.

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dsudis October 15 2008, 17:47:12 UTC
Thank you! :)

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sixish October 14 2008, 23:07:09 UTC
I am loving this - was looking forward to it from the moment you mentioned it - but my favorite line so far is this:

...and still he'd never realized it was him Jack was focusing on, really him, instead of a boyfriend-shaped object, or a sex-partner-shaped one, or an interchangeably beloved member of his team.

Just perfect.

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dsudis October 15 2008, 17:51:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad that worked for you.

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random_nexus January 5 2009, 22:08:22 UTC
Ditto and ditto
wow.

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dsudis January 7 2009, 16:56:24 UTC
Thank you!

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dsudis October 15 2008, 17:51:53 UTC
Thank you! :)

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thrace_adams October 15 2008, 05:15:59 UTC
Jack totally made a comeback here.

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dsudis October 15 2008, 17:52:20 UTC
*grins*

There's a reason Ianto loves him, eh?

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