moment of hesitation

[aerye]

Ray/Ray, not explicit, prompt--moment of hesitation

Comments

[sdwolfpup]

Mmmm. I love the different visions of how it could play out, and how you leave us at the end. It's sort of a choose-your-own-adventure of Ray/Ray kissing!

Yay! Thank you!

[catwalksalone]

Of course he is sure. Because they are Meant To Be. *gets on soapbox*

This is just gorgeous, hesitant and hot all at the same time.

[snoopypez]

That was woooonderful. I love the writing style especially. :D It wouldn't be perfect without it, but it's there, so it is.

[brynnmck]

Oh, man. I love love love this. It's so charged, and gives a quick, sharp snapshot of the past and all these possibilities for the future, all funneling down to one, so we're finally sure right along with Ray. Really beautifully done. I KIND OF LOVE YOU A LOT.

[akite]

I like all the variations on how it might play out, but if I were a betting woman, I'd put my money on the last one. *g*