I knew it! I knew it--I was hoping you were going this way, and you did! clapping hands joyfully! Great show don't tell, here, too--you don't have to tell us that Welsh understands Ray, or why, you're showing us right here. And geez, there's something about putting this Ray-ismo onto Welsh that makes Welsh really fuckin' sexy, too.
The whole way through I kept hoping this was going to turn out to be Harding, and sure enough, it was. Woo-hoo!
I love the parallels between Welsh and Kowalski. And the voice seemed right-on to me. I love the paragraphs that begin "How could she have been prepared..." and "How could he have been prepared..."
Poor Harding! You make me want to take him home and cook for him. Really great stuff, Shay!
on the other hand....get out of my head, woman! I mean, even though we didn't write about Welsh in the same way, this is the second challenge where we've done similar things. I already share my brain with too many people! ;o)
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Or maybe it's the redhead! *g*
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Always thought Welsh was quite gentle with Kowalski, even though he mocks him from time to time. Thanks for your comments!
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Ooo, I like! Ray and Welsh, no wonder they hit it off and Ray's kinda like a son.
Thanks Shay!
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I love the parallels between Welsh and Kowalski. And the voice seemed right-on to me. I love the paragraphs that begin "How could she have been prepared..." and "How could he have been prepared..."
Nice work.
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I mean, really.
Wow.
You are fantastic. Superb. Brilliant, even.
I want to have your babies.
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::blushing furiously:: Thanks.
I want to have your babies.
Sure, um, okay.
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on the other hand....get out of my head, woman! I mean, even though we didn't write about Welsh in the same way, this is the second challenge where we've done similar things. I already share my brain with too many people! ;o)
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Well, Welsh deserves a little attention. Thanks for commenting~
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