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Interruptions challenge by Aria

Nov 13, 2009 00:20

Title: A State of Being (In Five Steps, With Flowchart)
Author: Aria
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2828
Summary: Ray always did things backwards with Fraser. Out of order, upside-down, hanging off rooftops, putting the sled before the Dief, all that good stuff. Ray Kowalski's guide to romantic relationships.

( A State of Being (In Five Steps, With Flowchart) )

interruptions challenge

Comments 69

akamine_chan November 13 2009, 05:38:43 UTC

I really like Ray shivering with the immensity of it. Nicely done.

ariastar November 13 2009, 17:12:13 UTC

Thank you!

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ariastar November 13 2009, 17:12:23 UTC

Thanks! :)

oneechan19 November 13 2009, 06:20:20 UTC

Oh, boys. I love Ray's five steps, and even though Fraser is in the Twilight Zone, he was there at the final step before Ray was. Silly boys. *hugs them (and Dief (who has a Dief-chair! <3 ))*

ariastar November 13 2009, 17:13:36 UTC

I think they probably take turns being the smart one about their emotional lives. :D Meanwhile of course Dief is with the program and has his own chair and everything.

Which is by way of saying, hee, thanks. <3

anxiety_junkie November 13 2009, 07:06:59 UTC

The whole flowchart idea is brilliant. Nicely done!

ariastar November 13 2009, 17:13:52 UTC

Yay! Thank you. :)

andeincascade November 13 2009, 07:20:48 UTC

Good things happen when you step away from the SGA, see? :::hugs story to bosom:::

ariastar November 13 2009, 17:14:49 UTC

*gigglesnort* Okay, I confess that your capslock SGA horror is partially responsible for me sitting down and writing this. So obviously good things do happen! Thank you. <333