2nd Badfic Challenge, by bluebrocade

[bluebrocade]

Title: Back to School
Pairing: Fraser/Ray
Rating: PG
Warnings: explicit GAY sex
Summary: Can music bring Fraser and Ray together?
Prompt: Due South, the High School Musical, by

Comments

[mizface]

OMG that was AWFUL!!!! The blended Rays was a stroke of genius! Fraser's fantasies were downright scary! The entire "If only" section was a scream! And the sex in front of the band students - priceless! This is one of my favorite lines:

It was an important and special project, but he was only human, and it hurt him to know he would never have Ray's fingers inside him or kiss him.

Truly terrible, and oh so funny!

[bluebrocade]

Thanks! I'm glad it was awful. ;-)

[pharis]

This is a masterpiece ... a horrible, horrible masterpiece.

One of its million moments of brilliance:
He held up the hammer and looked at it perplexedly. He felt a lot of confusion at that moment, but he wanted to understand.
I think this was the point where my giggles became continuous. Picturing mutant!Ray(s) cocking his head like a dog.

And crying Fraser ... it hurts, it hurts!

[bluebrocade]

Picturing mutant!Ray(s) cocking his head like a dog.

Hee! Love that image.

Thanks!

[mergatrude]

Oh my god! That was brilliantly awful! I can't even begin to name my favourite part. Is it the horrible fantasies? Or the wonderful use of the "pounding" imagery? Or Ray "overcompensating"? I think it might be the mutant!Ray(s) saying "hawt" repeatedly. *g*

[bluebrocade]

omg it's so HAWT that you thought it was brilliantly awful. THANKS! ;D

[tinzelda]

This was priceless. I sort of dropped my laptop because I was laughing (I hope I didn't break it). So so so so funny.

[bluebrocade]

Thanks!

[brigantine]

Aaaiiiii!! My eyes, my eyes!

*cackles wildly*

That was horrifically fabulous. Just... seriously. If I didn't know you'd done this on purpose I'd be begging for the brain bleach. \o/!!

[bluebrocade]

Thanks!