Amnesty Challenge: Decompression Syndrome, by mergatrude (Undercover Challenge)

[mergatrude]

Title: Decompression Syndrome

Comments

[j_s_cavalcante]

Awwww! Kowalski/Gardino! Two great tastes that go great together. :)

Those two will never not be hot. Also, I love the characterizations here. The ease between them. And...poor Ray, that Stella can't help him with the decompression. Just, Awwww!

Also, I love his line near the end" "Doesn't go with that tie, anyway."

Well, duh, Ray, it's Louis. He's never going to put on something that matches.

\o/ for some more wonderful K/G. I think it works fine. Whatever you wanted the story to be that it isn't? We'll never know! :)

[mergatrude]

Awwww! Kowalski/Gardino! Two great tastes that go great together.

They do! It's really kind of inexplicable, isn't it.

Thanks for your kind words, ma'am! &hearts

[mergatrude]

It's awful, but I can't stop picking at it. *sigh*

[catwalksalone]

I think the worst thing is knowing what's to come for them all. Kowalski's going to lose Stella and Gardino and he's got no rescue for a while after that. *pets him*

Really great characterisation. (I miss you, Louis!)

[mergatrude]

Thanks, Cat. &hearts

[elandae]

These two fit together so well in this. The back and forth between them feels wonderfully natural, I love the sensation that they just really understand one another. So lovely.

[mergatrude]

Thank you so much.

[love_jackianto]

Great Ray/Louis banter. They're like pineapple and pizza; they go so well together.

[mergatrude]

And no one can work out how or why. But they do!

Thanks.