TEAM WHIMSY: Day 10, "My Life As A Dog"

Sep 09, 2008 07:15

Title: My Life As A Dog
Author: etcetera_cat
Team: Whimsy
Prompt: “What do you mean, they did it?”
Pairing(s): Fraser/Kowalski preslash
Length: 6,200 words
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: For reasons that aren’t freaking being explained at this juncture, the whole of Chicago is trying to beat Ray to death with his nose.
Author's notes: Thanks to the whole ( Read more... )

ds match 2, team whimsy

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wihluta September 8 2008, 20:21:26 UTC
I really like the way you incorporated colours into the smell. Makes my synesthetic brain all happy.

A happy Fraser, Ray discovers with some surprise, smells like buttered popcorn and melting sugar.
Aw, yes. I can totally believe that. :-)

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j_s_cavalcante September 9 2008, 00:24:09 UTC
Yes, yes, on both counts. Synesthesia FTW. (Until I read up on the subject a couple of years ago, I was not aware that synesthesia is not everyone's experience. It just seemed natural, to me.) It was a great way to describe the extra layers of scent perception that dogs obviously have.

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wihluta September 9 2008, 07:44:37 UTC
Until I read up on the subject a couple of years ago, I was not aware that synesthesia is not everyone's experience.
Yeah, happened to me too. I once tried to explain to someone that a five is blue and that ketchup smells green and they were totally perplexed. lol

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0walking_naked0 September 10 2008, 18:20:30 UTC
I do that! I had to have an injection not long ago, and then promptly told my friend it was 'orange'. Hey, it was orange, ok? Bright orange. Also, five is not blue. Five is bluey-green. Eight is blue. :D

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luzula September 8 2008, 20:31:58 UTC
This is so much fun! This is great:

the entire universe is trying to climb up his nose and scribble graffiti on his brain.

And this is funny:

No, it sucks. It really, really sucks. Also, Fraser? Why does your wolf sound like a surfer dude?

“I fear that he’s been over exposed to American television.”

And I love Ray being petted. So cute.

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etcetera_cat September 22 2008, 21:10:44 UTC
:D Thank you! The universe really has it in for poor halfwolf!Ray *pats him on the head some more*

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petronelle September 8 2008, 22:24:59 UTC
I adore Dief-as-a-human. Ray-as-a-dog makes me giggle and punch the air with joy, but oh, Dief.

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etcetera_cat September 22 2008, 21:11:27 UTC
They're both really kind of ridiculous amounts of fun, aren't they?

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meresy September 8 2008, 22:49:09 UTC
This is adorable. ♥

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etcetera_cat September 22 2008, 21:12:03 UTC
I aim to please, Meres! (and possibly to drown everyone in sweet, sugary crack)

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lilac_one September 8 2008, 22:56:05 UTC
This is made entirely of YAY!

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etcetera_cat September 22 2008, 21:12:18 UTC
YAY!

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