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Midsummer Amnesty 2008: Vecchio Challenge by keerawa

Jun 19, 2008 08:30

Title: Field Training
Author: keerawa
Rating: PG-13 for racial epithets
Length: 491 words
Prompt: Vecchio challenge
Summary: Patrolman Ray Vecchio gets a lesson in community policing.
Notes: Thanks to brynnmck for the thoughtful beta.

( Field Training )

vecchio challenge, midsummer amnesty 2008

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keerawa June 21 2008, 00:02:09 UTC

Thank you, thayln, I was trying to make it feel real!

sdwolfpup June 19 2008, 16:49:52 UTC

I really liked this; it's a nice snapshot of a barely explored time in Vecchio's past.

keerawa June 21 2008, 00:02:56 UTC

Thanks! Ray does tend to assume the worst of people, but I think he has good reason for it.

akite June 19 2008, 16:52:31 UTC

Oh, yeah, this reads very real to me. Poor Vecchio, even his mentor has feet of clay.

keerawa June 21 2008, 00:04:30 UTC

Ray really, really wants someone to believe in here. Thanks, akite!

belmanoir June 19 2008, 16:56:38 UTC

Aw, Rayyyyyyyyy! I love him and his cop integrity SO MUCH!

And awwwwww. Fraser in his future!

keerawa September 30 2008, 05:34:14 UTC

Hey there Belmanoir! I just realized that I somehow missed this comment. THanks for reading!

noctuabunda June 19 2008, 17:18:16 UTC

Oh wow. Very nice. I'm just happy I know that someday, somebody did surprise him. :)

keerawa June 21 2008, 00:04:44 UTC

Me too! Thanks, noctabunda!