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Self-Insertion Challenge by Berty

Mar 05, 2008 23:17

Title: Trust Issues
Author: Berty
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: G
Word count: 813
Summary: A stakeout with a difference.
Notes: Thanks to the eternally gorgeous secretlybronte for a snappy but thorough beta. Any remaining errors are mine.

( Trust Issues )

self-insertion challenge

Comments 73

slidellra March 5 2008, 23:30:54 UTC

1. The cut-tag failed, poor thing.

2. This is fabulous. Adorable. I smile big and happy. Tough guys!

bertybertle March 5 2008, 23:32:33 UTC

Hehehe! Was fixing it when your post came in. Thank you!

c_regalis March 5 2008, 23:47:52 UTC

Hee! So cute!

And especially the And she was still there when they doubled back five minutes later.

bertybertle March 6 2008, 20:58:16 UTC

Thank you! *beams*

dugrival March 5 2008, 23:52:16 UTC

I really don't get the kidfic thing usually, but you sprung this on me and it was so damned charming! I'm grinning. Grapes! Bear! Awwww.

bertybertle March 6 2008, 21:00:03 UTC

Darn! And I forgot to warn for it... the kidfic thing! Sorry! *smacks self in head* But thanks for commenting and not barfing! :-)

dugrival March 6 2008, 21:40:13 UTC

No, no, no warning! Sometimes people like me need to be tricked for our own good. ; )

brigantine March 6 2008, 00:05:35 UTC

This is the first time she’s been away from us and…”

*snort* More like this is the first time they've been away from her.

Adorable boyz! \o/

bertybertle March 6 2008, 21:01:20 UTC

True! And thank you.

malnpudl March 6 2008, 00:15:37 UTC

HEEEE! So very cute! :-D

And that is the perfect last line. *g*

bertybertle March 6 2008, 21:02:51 UTC

*grins* Thank you, Mal.