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TEAM ANGST: Day 11, "Night Train"

Nov 03, 2007 14:04

Title: Night Train
Author: greensilver
Team: Angst
Prompt: "When will you be back?"
Pairing(s): Fraser/Vecchio, Fraser/Victoria
Length: 1300 words
Rating: PG
Warnings: AU.
Summary: Maybe Ray had gone a little crazy, too.

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Comments 18

green_grrl November 3 2007, 19:16:30 UTC

Oh, God, yeah. I've always wondered what would have happened if Fraser had made it onto the train. ^^^ This. OUCH.

meresy November 3 2007, 20:14:58 UTC

Wah, yeah, that's what could have happened. And it's very sad how Ray compromised himself further to cover Fraser's tracks. Because he so would. And of course unuttered/unrequited love is always woe. *sniff*

Excellent fic.

ignazwisdom November 3 2007, 20:27:41 UTC

Very, very ouch. :(

mrs_laugh_track November 3 2007, 20:31:22 UTC

Excellent. The idea of Ray searching the morgues because he didn't know if he had killed Fraser is so sad to think about.

luzula November 3 2007, 21:22:36 UTC

Ouch. The use of the prompt is really good, I like the way it's repeated.

the cleverly constructed lies that kept Fraser off the Most Wanted list at the expense of Ray's integrity

Yeah, he so would do that.