TEAM ROMANCE: Day 10, "not my usual thing"

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Title: not my usual thing
Author: etben
Team: Romance
Prompt: "You're crossing a line."
Pairing(s): F/V/K, F/V, F/K, V/K
Length: 4,100 words
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: The Mountie And His Rays.

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Comments

[luzula]

Oh, cool, this is really great, and I'm glad I had this to read after the Angst one. Though the lack of jealousy between Ray and Ray at both being Fraser's boyfriends took a little bit of suspension of disbelief for me at first. But I guess the story starts after they got there, so okay.

Actually, this fic kind of makes me think of the vid Goody Two Shoes.

For some reason, I find this paragraph really hot:

Kowalski's feeling the same way, too - it's obvious from the way he watches Fraser, steady and intent and hot. It takes him a few seconds to respond whenever anyone tries to get his attention, too - a little lag, a moment while he re-adjusts his brain to the real world, out of fantasyland. It's not a big thing, not long enough that anyone else would notice, but it's clear as anything to Ray.

[belmanoir]

Awww!!

"You sure?" Kowalski's fingers go a little white at the knuckles. "Maybe you should stop eyefucking me at work, then." He's talking tough, but his voice is a little rough, a little shaky, like maybe he's not so sure of himself, like maybe he's worried - like maybe he's been jerking off every night, too, and again in the mornings, not sure what to think about.

False bravado!Kowalski gets me every time.

[brigantine]

I like the way the Weirdness Factor rises in Chicago as soon as Fraser gets back. *snort*

Lots of fun, the two Rays trying to figure each other out, trying to decide what to do about his Fraser-has-two-boyfriends situation without anybody getting decked in the process. Heh.

[dragonflymuse]

Oh, sweet :) Nicely done! ::wriggles in with the boys and snuggles tight::

[viciouscats]

Tnat was nice.