TEAM ROMANCE: Day 7, "Find Me a Find"

Oct 31, 2007 08:27

Title: Find Me a Find
Author: green_grrl
Team: Romance
Prompt: "And you had to tell me this at three in the morning?"
Pairing(s): Fraser/Kowalski, Stella/Vecchio
Length: 16,500 words
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: AU
Author's note: Oodles of thanks to all of team Romance for the brainstorming and handholding and cheeleading, and especially to slidellra, kristiinthedark and jadelennox for betaing ( Read more... )

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kassrachel October 30 2007, 19:59:05 UTC
Oh, this is wonderful! Totally adorable.I love the idea of Vecchio opening up a matchmaking business, and Stella trying to get Ray set up with someone. And the baseball game was awesome. And the hockey. And the dinner with Ray's parents. And the Tom Yom soup. :-)

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green_grrl November 17 2007, 18:57:20 UTC
Thank you kindly! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was so much fun coming up with their dates.

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grey853 October 30 2007, 20:22:39 UTC
This was great! I don't normally like AUs, but this worked like a charm. I adored the idea that Ray was supposed to hook up with one of those women and Ben just surprised the hell out of everybody, including himself.

It was wonderfully written and fleshed out, a true delight. I found myself grinning through most of it and that makes for a hell of a fun story.

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green_grrl November 17 2007, 18:58:03 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you gave my AU a go. I grinned a lot writing it, so yay!

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gingergal2 April 11 2014, 19:17:59 UTC

I'm surprised you liked it. I thought you couldn't stand Ray Vecchio and didn't want to see him in any fanfiction. Well, sorry - he's a big part of Fraser's life as his best friend, and you can't ignore him. I still don't understand why you don't at least respect like the friendship that he has with Fraser, and badmouth him.

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kaj_22 October 30 2007, 20:23:16 UTC
*squishes as-yet-unknown-author* That was adorable! I love how they are both completely clueless while everyone else can see what's going on.

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green_grrl November 17 2007, 18:58:23 UTC
*is squished* Hee! Thank you!

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zabira October 30 2007, 20:24:52 UTC
hee! so adorkable and romantic! very nicely done, with their mutual confusion, and tom yum soup and d'awwwwwwwww!

and i just LOVED this bit, it was SO RAY i could see it:

"The Queen? The Queen?" Ray added more height to the hops in his sideways stride. "Ooo, Canadians!" Ray screwed up his face and balled his fists in frustration, and Ben smiled inwardly. "I'd like to see the Queen interrogate some dirtbag that's been slipping roofies to girls. I'll bet ten minutes in she'd be whackin' him with her handbag." He mimed it in midair.

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green_grrl November 17 2007, 18:58:59 UTC
Yay! You picked out one of my favorite parts! I may *ahem* have a slight thing for Ray's physicality. :-D

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anna_luna October 30 2007, 21:16:27 UTC
I adored this!

Especially how everybody knew before them. And Dief was perfect, I adored the line about the "team effort" regarding the flowers for Ray's mom.

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green_grrl November 17 2007, 18:59:30 UTC
Dief-the-florist is just too cute! And Team Romance's mascot, don'cha know. ;-)

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