Five challenge

[leafy22]

Title: Five Times Ray Kowalski Tried To Make Someone Feel At Home (Even If It Didn’t Always Work)
Author: leafy22
Characters and pairing: Mainly F/K
Notes: Thanks to the wonderful kill_claudiofor the beta - and the IT support! About 2300 words.
ETA - vsee  recorded a podfic of this story which can be found here.

Comments

[viciouscats]

Oh, this is lovely. I especially liked Stella's snippet and the last one. :)

[leafy22]

Thank you!

[charashi]

I loved the first bit so much. I loved the whole fic, but the first part especially with Stella was fantastic. It felt really natural -- I got the real 'married couple' feel from it that I sometimes don't see in other fics with Ray/Stella. I could easily incorporate it into my own personal Ray/Stella canon (and I just might!). And the last part was very, very sweet. :)

[leafy22]

Thanks - I haven't written much Stella before so I really appreciate your comments.

[kill_claudio]

Yaaaaaaaay you posted! I ♥ this so much. I went into paroxysms of giggles all over again at the “Wanted some fresh air. Hot. You’re ... I’m...hot...aren’t you hot?” bit. Oh Ray.

[leafy22]

I posted! Thanks for your kind comments - before and after!

[china_shop]

Oh, this is really lovely! Thoughtful!Ray! ♥ I especially like:

He decided not to put any music on, because you could never quite be sure what music, if any, Fraser wanted to hear on any particular day

which is beautifully telling about both of them. Yay!

[leafy22]

Thanks - I'm glad you liked that bit! Yes, Ray may be able to second-guess many things about Fraser by now but he doesn't think 'today's playlist' is *ever* going to be one of them...

[beledibabe]

Delightful!

[leafy22]

Thank you!