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First line challenge by ifreet

May 18, 2007 10:28

Title: Imperative
Pairing: F/K
Rating: PG
First line prompt is from sprat's Edge.
Many thanks to bluebrocade for the beta!

( Roll. )

first-line festival

Comments 26

hurry_sundown May 18 2007, 16:53:24 UTC

Yeah.

Yeah.

Nice work - you packed one hell of a lot into 8 paragraphs (especially considering how short some of them are *g*).

Realize that you could kill him or kiss him.

Moments like these are my personal fic-kink.

ifreet May 19 2007, 02:18:53 UTC

They are tiny paragraphs indeed. Thank you!

akite May 18 2007, 16:59:09 UTC

Oh that Fraser! What do you do with him? Kill him or kiss him, yes.

ifreet May 19 2007, 02:19:22 UTC

I know which I'd pick...

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ifreet May 19 2007, 02:19:43 UTC

Thanks!

j_s_cavalcante May 18 2007, 18:07:52 UTC

Ooh--really cool! A whole snippet written in the imperative mood!

Realize that you could kill him or kiss him.

Decide.

Fucking brilliant.

ifreet May 19 2007, 02:25:36 UTC

It seemed like a challenge - I'm very glad it worked. Thank you!

bluebrocade May 18 2007, 18:54:30 UTC

Oooh! Those last two sentences still give me the shivers! Excellent.

ifreet May 19 2007, 02:16:55 UTC

Thank you again for both the polish and vote of confidence.