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Amnesty: Genderfuck Challenge

Dec 31, 2006 01:17

Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ray/Ray, allusions to existence of F/K/V
Length: 2650ish words
Notes: I blame
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amnesty 2006, genderfuck challenge

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jamethiel_bane December 31 2006, 01:46:26 UTC

YAY!!! YAY!!!

This is wonderful. I loved how Kowalski is still pissy as even though he's now a she, and how Vecchio just will NOT hit a girl.

I also think that further F/K/V genderfuck would be hot. This fandom needs more genderfuck

YAY!

llassah December 31 2006, 14:44:04 UTC

Hee! So glad you liked, m'dear! And Kowalski's gonna be pissy whatever happens *g*. Further F/K/V genderfuck? Maybe they alternate being female. 'Say, Fraser, looks like it's your turn this week. Good mooorning breasts!'

'This fandom needs more genderfuck'- 3 months ago, I am not sure if I would have agreed with you *g* But now? Fuck yes.

elementalv December 31 2006, 04:01:00 UTC

So... you're writing the sequel where one of the boys doesn't manage to get the condom on, and Kowalski ends up pregnant, right?

llassah December 31 2006, 14:46:42 UTC

*sticks hands over ears* la la laaaaaaa, can't heeeeaaarr yooouuu! Because Kowalski pregnant? Just- well, let me cling to one writing border please.

'Vecchio, I don't give a flying sideways fuck what fucking time in the morning it is, get me a goddamn hotdog with extra relish, now!'

elementalv December 31 2006, 16:30:45 UTC

let me cling to one writing border pleaseYeah. Right. Pull the other one -- it's got bells on ( ... )

llassah December 31 2006, 17:03:21 UTC

I am shocked you think I am capable of debasing myself that- yeah, ok, I can't write that without smirking. Genderfuck pregnancy. You are an evil evil person with shiny wonderful snippets of border breaking temptingness. And this?

Which was another way of saying Kowalski had PMS 24/7.

Wins one hell of a lot. girl!Kowalski pregnant. That's some harder form of crack, that is, well, heroin? Mixed with acid, and washed down with meths with a chaser of cocaine. I might just post this under your name, if I ever write it *tries ever so hard to resist*

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llassah December 31 2006, 14:51:19 UTC

Hey! Glad you liked! I didn't want to make RayK into a complete bad of hormones and mush, because yeah, that isn't him. You have no idea how happy I am that this came across in the fic, because a personality transplant doesn't have to be part of the deal *g* And yes, there are many many fics that could be written about this scenario *twitches writing fingers* Thank you very much

lipstickcat December 31 2006, 06:11:39 UTC

*fans self*

I'm incoherent, which might have something to do with the time, but mostly its to do with the OMG!Sodamnhot!ness of this. Girl!Kowalski is RAWR!

llassah December 31 2006, 14:53:32 UTC

Good grief, you're up early! *is impressed and awed*
Thankyou! I'm glad I stole a few words *g*. Having the mental image that started off this fic sort of made me stop dead in the aisle of the supermarket and space out for a bit (which caused a bit of an aisle jam, but all for the cause of porn) And girl!Kowalski? I so would

lipstickcat January 1 2007, 23:12:07 UTC

Heh. I was on a 7am - 3pm shift because my boss is nice and I'd mentioned I'd need time to drive from Leics to Shropshire. On the downside, I was too knackered to care much by the time midnight arrived...

Aisle jams in the name of porn - I'm sure the OAP who was stuck behind you understood entirely. In fact, if you'd explained it to her, I'm sure she'd have asked a shop assistant where you could find the Isle Jam, whose sale profits go to the charity P.O.R.N. (Polaks in Outstanding Raunchy Negligee)

girl!Kowalski - Absolutely!

llassah January 1 2007, 23:37:54 UTC

Hee! Girl!kowalski in kinky underwear! *melts* Beacuse it's Fraser's birthday! And she turns up at the consulate, in a long coat, and underneath? (god, this is going to turn into an epic soon)

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nos4a2no9 December 31 2006, 11:31:04 UTC

Yay! You posted! And I love the changes you made - this was definitely boy/girl sex, and it was hot. Love the little details you added: you really pumped up the emotional content by more clearly defining how things stand with Fraser and where Vecchio fits in RayK's life. Beautifully done!

llassah December 31 2006, 14:56:11 UTC

hehe, glad the changes made it gooderer, and hetterer *g*. Thank you so much again for the beta, it really shifted my ideas for the fic, which was a good thing, better than the 'why are they having sex without Fraser there? They just are, ok?' So thank you! *snuggles*

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