Queer challenge, by joandarck

[joandarck]

Pairing: RayK/Fraser
Length: 2725 words
Rating: G-PG
Warnings: cliche (undercover in a gay bar), no sex, no angst, no nutritional content whatsoever.

Comments

[grey853]

LOL. I knew Fraser had a wicked sense of humor given the right situation. Cute.

[joandarck]

He does! When he did his 'attempt' at slang in Mountie and Soul, culminating in "'sssup!" - well, it frightened me. *g* I'm glad you enjoyed.

[missapocalyptic]

This was incredible. So very funny, and not clichéd at all! I loved Fraser's way of "blending in" and I can so picture Ray's face when Fraser introduced him as his lover *giggles*

Not too sure about the rating, though. I mean, it contains words like "ass", wouldn't that make it PG or something? Not that I mind...

[joandarck]

Yay! I really think Fraser might do that, too. No, I'm serious. He's never been one to shy back from romantic terms, and were he undercover in a gay bar, he would do said undercover with gusto.

Rating's an interesting point. I used to warn for language, but I decided that no one here's a child anyway and what people really want to know is how much sex happens, so I rated it G. But now that you mention it, I guess discussion of pornography may be enough to boost it above the 100% squeaky clean level, so I'll PG it. Thanks!

[joandarck]

Hee! Thank you! Oh, Fraser. He can be so out of control sometimes. While remaining totally uptight. Dear Fraser.

[springwoof]

*snerk*!! so funny! love it. very clever, and walked right on the edge of my embarrassment squick without going over it. kudos to you!

[joandarck]

Aw, yay! That's a good place to be, that edge. I'm glad it didn't go over. Thanks so much!

[lucifercircle]

Fraser winding Ray up is always fun. I'd like to see how the rest of this evening plays out. This was very believeable, good job.

[joandarck]

You found this believable? Awesome. *basks*