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Sneaking in the Back Door of the Fuck or Die Challenge by One Traveller

Jul 03, 2005 17:57

...since Speranza hasn't called this one yet. Around 300 words of untitled pre-slash, not to be taken too seriously. Written in a hurry and given a quick read through by hydrostatic_testsubject (who's only seen as many episodes of dS as I have.)

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kijikun July 4 2005, 02:37:49 UTC

Marry me. Or at least let me worship you.

*G*

Oh Cool.... one_traveller July 4 2005, 03:23:45 UTC

A comment, a proposal and worship. I feel so happy:)

I love your 'you know' drabble, btw. I also did your poll. Just for future reference, the answer is always 'write porn.'

Re: Oh Cool.... kijikun July 4 2005, 03:54:56 UTC

*G* I think I must have been on a sugar high or something that day, but I've been threaten with unspeakables if I ever write more of it.

But really you made the Trekie in me so damn happy with that one. My mom and me just watched that ep too.

tyk July 4 2005, 02:44:47 UTC

clever! It took me to the end to figure it out. Of course, Bob's blithering didn't help! Poor Fraser! I have to admit, I don't know that Bob would be that ... sanguine about Carolyn and Spock, even if it was to save his life.

one_traveller July 4 2005, 04:11:31 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

I don't know that Bob would be that...sanguine about Caroline and Spock, even if it was to save his life.I get what you mean. I'd certainly have trouble with it, if it were me. Originally Fraser was going to be the product of some other Human/Vulcan coupling who'd been left with Bob and Caroline like a changeling left by the Fairies. But then I ran this idea by Hydrostatic Test Subject and the look on his face when I got to "not when your mother could help him" and I knew I had it. And my brain refused to write anything else. He wasn't so sure ( ... )

tyk July 4 2005, 04:47:44 UTC

Oh, please, don't misunderstand - I do love it! and Bob just not quite able to get it out -- more than makes up for my wondering about his "generousity".

one_traveller July 4 2005, 05:42:53 UTC

Your comments were very nice, so I definitely hadn't taken offense. I agree that Bob being okay with his beloved Caroline fucking some alien does require a certain suspension of disbelief. I had a problem with it myself. I had him say he couldn't believe he agreed to it as a way of acknowledging that.

Btw, HTS say, "Sanguine...good word."

sageness July 4 2005, 02:44:56 UTC

*snorfle*

This is hysterical--and just possible enough to make you wonder. *g*

one_traveller July 4 2005, 04:23:30 UTC

Thanks:) Giuletta's story got me thinking about the ways Fraser is like a Vulcan, which got me thinking about the ways he's not like a Vulcan. But a half Vulcan, hmmm...

aclarar July 4 2005, 03:02:19 UTC

It took me two reads and like five minutes to finally get it.

After that I laugh for ten minutes more

Hysterical

one_traveller July 4 2005, 04:37:17 UTC

Cool, I succeeded in being Just Obscure Enough! (Which is the goal of about 3/4 of my life. I once stopped ordering United Federation of Planets checks after they changed the design so it was too obvious:) And I made you laugh *does a happy dance.*

Thank You!

xtricks July 4 2005, 03:04:37 UTC

Oh, dear *god* ... more please, please, please! Vuclans and due South - my god, I'm gonna die! I *love* pon farr stories... and this ... I'm incoherent with want. Don't stop now. please?

one_traveller July 4 2005, 05:13:18 UTC

I love pon farr stories

So do I. Isn't the internet wonderful? In the Old Days I managed to get my hands on one, maybe two K/S 'zines. When I got on line I went K/S crazy. Then discovered the Whole Wide World of Slash *hugs computer.*

I thought up this story as a one-off, joke sort of thing. This is only the second fic I've posted since I got on line. Before that I hadn't really written much fic since I was in a ST club back in the '80s. And I've never actually written porn. But now you have me wondering. I'd be willing to give it a try, but I'd definitely need help. On the dS end of it, I've only seen up to half way through season 2. On the slash end, it would certainly help to have a beta that wasn't my husband, the extremely indulgent but completely heterosexual guy;)

xtricks July 4 2005, 05:35:52 UTC

I assume then that you've read Killashandra's work and Grey Wolf? Classic ST: OS writers.

I'd be happy to beta for you, if you like. Your Benton voice seems pretty spot on to me, so far and that very first paragraph about what Benton's feeling physically had a good, tactile, visceral feel which suggests you should be able to handle porn if you want too.

one_traveller July 11 2005, 08:25:56 UTC

Sorry it's taken me so long to reply; I've been sick for the past few days. Brain a little squishy.

I'd love it if you would beta for me. Thank you. Though it does occur to me that if I'm going to write more of this I'll need to pick a Ray. I've been deliberately vague so far so the reader can insert her Ray of Choice. I should probably see some Kowalski eps first so I know which one I prefer, and if it turns out to be RayK, get enough of a handle on the character to write him. Luckily, Ceares is going to send me the eps on data cd so I can watch them on my computer.

I'm realizing how long it's been since I've read any K/S, I've been so busy exploring other fandoms. I remember Killashandra and Grey Wolf being big names in the fandom, so I'm sure I must have read some of their stuff, but my poor squishy brain isn't bringing any particular stories to mind. My more recent forays into Trek fanfic came after finding a book at a Friends of the Library sale called Treks Not Taken: A Parody by Steven R. Boyett. It's written as if famous ( ... )

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