Fuck or Die Challenge by Kijikun

[kijikun]

Title: Lie back and think of Chicago
Rating: Adult (sex!)
Warnings: Questionable consent, m/m
Pairing: Turnbull/RayK, impiled RayK/Fraser
Word count: 949
supper fast last mintue Beta: shrewreader
Notes: My Kingdom for another week of writing time. This one is so in my to be expanded box.

Comments

[cranberryink]

Mmmmmm. I love that you're considering expanding on this. RayK/Turnbull is my sekrit OTP in this fandom, and there is always room for more stories about them.

This was lovely as is, though! Very nicely done.

[kijikun]

They are very fun to write about.

Glad you enjoyed it, even if I'm not capable of writing short PWP like a good smut writer.

[bibliokat]

Whooooooooooooooa.

[raveninthewind]

I'll add my "whoa!" to the others'.

It's angsty, but...I think it's really hot. My kink for ambiguous consent, I guess. Plus I always had a soft spot for Turnbull. {{{hugs them both, with a sympathetic look at Fraser}}}

[ceares]

Oh, wow-ouch for Ray, Turnbull and Fraser.

[mlyn]

Very nice. I'm another RayK/Turnbull fan, so I'm pleased to see people still writing for that pairing. I have to mention that your beta missed quite a bit of stuff, though.

The Beta....

[shrewreader]

Got to beta-ing it when she got home from 2nd day on new job, at about 9:30 at night. I know, not exactly my best job. (And looking back at my text of the edits and what she's got up there, I can actually see stuff that I fixed. I'm to wondering if Word Ate It. Ergh. Bloody Redmond)

Promise not to tell editrx, who taught me the craft?

Re: The Beta....

[kijikun]

Really? Dude.....*compares docs*

Re: The Beta....

[mlyn]

I won't tell, especially since I don't know him/her. And I'm not trying to be judgmental...nobody is perfect. My beta is a copy editor for a living, so she's like the best beta anyone can have, and I know I don't rise to the same standards when I read her work for her.