Mix n' Match Challenge, Love Is All Of Heaven Away by Ekaterinn

Jun 10, 2005 23:09

This is my longer response to the Mix n' Match challenge. The story takes place two years after this snippet, in which RayK pisses off the CPD and winds up doing some liaising instead of Fraser. There's another role swap in this one, inducing snark and angst in our poor Ray. *grins*

So I, with much thanks to my lovely beta mondschein1, now present 1767 ( Read more... )

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sjkasabi June 11 2005, 04:15:27 UTC
Hey, I love this! Great mix'n'match choices, and really well done :-)

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ekaterinn June 11 2005, 15:11:33 UTC
*grins* Thank you kindly!

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nataliadarimini June 11 2005, 04:49:07 UTC
You made me cry! Evil!

I love this so much. *sniffle* It's just so great.

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ekaterinn June 11 2005, 15:12:14 UTC
Aw, I'm sorry I made you cry. But I'm really glad you liked it - thank you so much!

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lipsum June 11 2005, 04:49:18 UTC
> Dief huffs and Fraser breaks off. He rubs Dief's fur gently. "I miss Ray too." And even more softly. "That's why I can't go back."

aww

> The room smells like sex. It's not overpowering, but it's definitely here. I look down. Fraser's laid out like a painting on the bed before me. His dark hair contrasts with the white pillow. His eyes are closed.
> He's not asleep. His hand moves underneath the thin blanket he has covering him. Small noises come from his mouth, sounding shallow and shy.

yum

> I curl up next to Fraser, legs tucked up near his knees and one arm floating on his chest. My lips are next to his chin. There's stubble. He needs to shave. I can't really feel anything much, but I can listen to him breathe, in and out.
> I do that for the rest of the night.

awwwwww

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ekaterinn June 11 2005, 15:12:42 UTC
*beams* I'm glad you liked it!

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celli June 11 2005, 04:50:55 UTC
Ooh, that's a cool way to use the challenge. *hugs Ray*

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ekaterinn June 11 2005, 15:13:15 UTC
*grins* Thanks! And yeah, Ray needs lots of hugs!

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delurker June 11 2005, 05:03:47 UTC
I love this idea and I love the way you've written it. And the end! <3.

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ekaterinn June 11 2005, 15:17:37 UTC
*blushes* I just couldn't get ghost!Ray out of my head. I'm glad you liked it - thanks!

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