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Ink Challenge: Mont Blanc by Ivy

Jan 07, 2005 16:08

I appear to be in a melancholy mood. There's no other way to explain this story.

Title: Mont Blanc
Author: Ivy
Words: 865
Rating: G
For the Ink challenge

( Mont Blanc )

Comments 15

raucousraven January 7 2005, 21:25:01 UTC

OUCH.

But it hurts so good.

hackthis January 7 2005, 21:28:51 UTC

Oh, how heart-breaking, and yet, so lovely.

akite January 7 2005, 22:55:18 UTC

Oh, my goodness! That was so hurty-good.

sageness January 7 2005, 23:09:21 UTC

I think what I love most is that his father never appears. He pops in at the most inopportune moments, but with this, what on earth would he say?

This was really nicely done. :)

ivy03 January 8 2005, 03:54:40 UTC

Thanks! And the real reason Fraser, Sr. doesn't pop in... I don't know how to write him. But if it works on an artistic level, that's even better.

cesperanza January 7 2005, 23:20:06 UTC

I liked that a lot; one of my favorite things--detail fic. A really nice glimpse at the inbetweens!

ivy03 January 7 2005, 23:36:14 UTC

Detail fic - is that what it's called? I was just inspired by a visit from my ex-roommate. The relationship she has to her Mont Blanc, a duplicate of her father's, is frightening to behold.