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"Stripped"-- by sprat
Dec 01, 2004 22:18
Naked without sex...plus a little sex. :)
Ray/Ray, NC-17, 2244 words.
ETA: eek! almost forgot to thank the incredible
qe2
for her keen-eyed beta... Thank-you!
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farwing
December 2 2004, 04:26:15 UTC
Hot. Damn, you're making me like Ray/Ray! Grrrrr....
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sprat
December 2 2004, 21:20:48 UTC
Hee. Give in to the power of the snark,
farwing
. It is useless to resist...
Thanks!
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farwing
December 3 2004, 04:49:12 UTC
I love snark. I want to marry snark. What is this word 'resist' that you speak of?
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lovekeller
December 2 2004, 06:18:21 UTC
Oh. Wow. H.O.T.
I believe in happily ever after for Fraser/RayK, but damn, I love this.
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sprat
December 2 2004, 21:23:30 UTC
Aw, I'm a fan of the F/K love myself. But Ray/Ray, it has its own...merits, no? ;)
Glad you liked!
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shayheyred
December 2 2004, 06:49:36 UTC
Oh, man. One of my big kinks - post-bust adrenaline fuck, with a side of I-was-worried-because-I-care. Loved it.
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sprat
December 2 2004, 21:24:56 UTC
Oh yay! So glad I could hit one of your buttons! Thanks.
:)
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kassrachel
December 2 2004, 07:18:38 UTC
Oh, holy wow! This is fantastic.
The details are great -- that opening scene is fantastic -- the whole setup is great, and it's one I totally wouldn't have thought of -- and then, well, the sex is hot like a hot thing. So wow. Thank you.
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sprat
December 2 2004, 21:26:38 UTC
No--thank *you*! That's great stuff to hear--I really appreciate it. And I'm glad you enjoyed!
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gurrier
December 2 2004, 07:59:31 UTC
it’s a surprise when he feels Vecchio’s fancy overcoat settle around his shoulders. It’s still warm inside, and it’s lined with silk or something.
Oooh, I like that image, RayK wrapped up in RayV's lovely coat. I loooove that coat. And Silent!Vecchio...
::sigh:: Evil woman, luring me away from F/RayK.
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sprat
December 2 2004, 21:32:50 UTC
Yess...it's all part of my fiendish plan...
gurrier
must be compelled to write smutty Ray/Ray...
::chuckles evilly::
Hee. All right--not really. But I am delighted you enjoyed. :)
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Thanks!
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I believe in happily ever after for Fraser/RayK, but damn, I love this.
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Glad you liked!
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:)
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The details are great -- that opening scene is fantastic -- the whole setup is great, and it's one I totally wouldn't have thought of -- and then, well, the sex is hot like a hot thing. So wow. Thank you.
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Oooh, I like that image, RayK wrapped up in RayV's lovely coat. I loooove that coat. And Silent!Vecchio...
::sigh:: Evil woman, luring me away from F/RayK.
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::chuckles evilly::
Hee. All right--not really. But I am delighted you enjoyed. :)
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