The Many Tongues Challenge

Mar 17, 2004 00:01

Not quite so last minute as last week! I present to you my Many Tongues Challenge response. Plot and title shamelessly stolen from the A-Team episode. A plot that was, in fact, shamelessly stolen from the Starsky and Hutch episode "Shootout." If Stephen J. Cannell can do it, then so can I (a conjecture that is sure to take me far in life ( Read more... )

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pearl_o March 16 2004, 21:24:39 UTC
Ooh! Dude, *cool*.

Ray grinned at him in a most irritating manner. "No one does, baby. I'm like the wind."

Heh.

"I - we were arguing -"

"Yeah. I distracted you."

"By your insistence on rooting for a team that does nothing but lose, yes…"

"Shut up about the Hawks, we're not talking about the Hawks right now."

Fraser swallowed. "What are we talking about?"

Bickering, yay!

Impossible. The man was impossible. And Fraser felt that same uncurling in his stomach as before, this great, vast, wholly illogical world expanding before him - and he went with it.

Yay!

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brooklinegirl March 22 2004, 06:55:53 UTC
Yay! You liked it! I adore Ray and Fraser bickering, and it seems they like it too - it can be tough to get them to stop. *g*

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brooklinegirl March 22 2004, 06:57:55 UTC
So glad you liked the boys arguing amongst themselves. :) And - yes - hot monkey sex on its way, some point in the near future. And really - were you in a car with Ray Kowalski, would you be able to keep your mind on anything but his eyes - his hair - his hands, his mouth? So much distraction!

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stopawhile March 16 2004, 23:11:53 UTC
I loved this! The bickering, the massive leaps of logic, the sharp conversation. Whoo! You put a really big smile on my face. Thanks! *vbg*

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brooklinegirl March 22 2004, 07:00:45 UTC
so glad to have been of service in making you merry! Thank you for the comments - so happy that Ray's anti-logic worked for you!

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brooklinegirl March 22 2004, 07:21:13 UTC
I think in this one I had him actually, specifically *not* wearing the glasses. :) For me, though, Ray pulling the glasses off and deliberately shoving his glasses into this jacket pocket is really inherently sexy in and of itself.

(Yes. I'm just that easy. Glasses in Ray's vicinity are enough to turn me on).

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brooklinegirl March 22 2004, 12:57:16 UTC
Oh! I think I remember that story. Or, I *do* remember the story, just not the title. And - yes. So sexy. So married. I adore it.

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lamardeuse March 17 2004, 03:46:55 UTC

Fraser lifted his head and peered over at his deranged partner. "Ray. I don’t understand you."

Ray grinned at him in a most irritating manner. "No one does, baby. I'm like the wind."

Because it's early in the morning, it took me a while to figure out what you were doing. (BTW, Hannibal says "Nice job, kid.")

This was fabulous, as usual. I love your turn of phrase in this:

Fraser swallowed, and licked his bottom lip, and leaned forward hesitantly, and kissed Ray. And kissed him. And kissed him. Because what this felt like was hunger. That uncurling in his stomach a few moments ago, when he'd admitted wanting this, was nothing, nothing compared to actually doing this. Ray tasted - sweet and hot and necessary.

All this AND hot sex comin' up? Oh, man, I am all over that! *g*

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brooklinegirl March 22 2004, 07:22:39 UTC
I was sitting there, desperately trying to figure out a plot of sorts which would result in great leaps of logic. What can I say? Hannibal came immediately to mind. :)

And yes - hot sex coming up - soon. *g*

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