Probe, by Voiceless009 for lipstickcat

[voiceless009]

Title: Probe
Author: Voiceless009
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: PG-13
Prompter and prompt: lipstickcat prompted: In "Seeing is Believing", after everyone has awoken from being hypnotised, Fraser tells Ray "Well, it would appear that you were abducted by aliens at the of ten."...
Warnings: If bad language needs a warning...

Comments

[lipstickcat]

Very well done. I love the double twist that it was a dream, and then a wet dream ^_^

I adored the bit where Ray is looking in the mirror, thinking that Fraser had given him the crease, and that wasn't such a bad thing. Very sweet.

“But, you-- I thought you-- I figured--” Oh, lord, somebody had stolen Ray’s brain and left a cantaloupe in its place.

You made me giggle at 2am in such a way that the neighbours are going to wonder what I'm up too. And if they ask I'm going to tell them it involves cantaloupe, just to worry them some more ;)

[voiceless009]

I'm so glad you like it!

...Did I say glad? I think relieved might be more accurate.

Anyway! Yes. Good. I'm pleased the cantaloupe bit made you giggle - makes me feel slightly less sad for giggling as I was writing it.

[extrabrightstar]

That was great. Now we need what happens at the apartement LOL

[voiceless009]

Well, now, I'm not entirely sure what happened at the apartment but I have it on good authority that the next morning Ray was wandering around with a goofy smile on his face and a slight hitch in his walk, so I can only assume it was a fun evening. I tried to ask Fraser but he just pulled the Innocent Mountie routine, so anything I could say here would be pure speculation...

[lucifercircle]

This was great. Funny and sweet. I especially liked Oh my god. Ray rubbed the bridge of his nose. Canadian’s contagious. You've got Fraser and Ray spot on.
Thanks for posting, good work.

[voiceless009]

Ooh, thanks. Always a pleasure to get compliments on characterisation, especially. And thank YOU for this community. You know, I think it's such a great idea. I really hope it does well.

[lucifercircle]

I hope it does well too. Tell all your friends - I need more prompts. Thanks for your support and for writing such a great story to kick things off.

[ultra_chrome]

Very cool. :)

It's great to see these guys hooking up in a first time fic that doesn't involve one or the other suddenly deciding that they're gay.

I love the "Canadian's contagious" bit. Especially because, well, it appears to be true. Or is it just Due South that does it you?

And Fraser following Ray around, hounding him to get him to say what Fraser already knew. How very Fraser. :)

All round a really enjoyable fic, with perfect characters. Bravo!!

[voiceless009]

Thank you. :)

You know, I believe that Due South DOES spread the Canadian-ness. I mean, there's only so many times I can say "Thank you kindly" in conversation and continue with the charade that I am most emphatically NOT channelling Fraser. ...Ahem.

[mickeymvt]

What a neat take on that scene- it wasn't really aliens, it was just a wet dream and Ray realizing he's bi. Fraser should have figured that out already-clueless Mountie :)

Your Ray was very in character and the canteloupe line cracked me up.

[voiceless009]

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it - I was beginning to have doubts about the premise before I posted but, come on, I just HAD to do it. ...It...made sense to me at the time. ;)