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Fiction. Saying Goodbye

Feb 03, 2007 16:30

Title: Saying Goodbye
Author: Nikki Harrington
Pairing: Benton Fraser/Ray Vecchio.
Genre: Slash. Established Relationship. Angst. Character death.
Rating: G
Word count: 300
Summary: Ray says goodbye to someone who used to mean the world to him.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, nor am I making any money from them. I merely borrow them from ( Read more... )

fic, slash

Comments 6

aingeal8c March 16 2007, 18:18:39 UTC

Ouch. Can I just say with Bob's propensity of late I was rather worried about who's death it was?

But still poor Ray.

I think you really cpatureed the emotion. We never see Ray at the grave but I cna imagine that would have what he was thinking.

Good he has Benny there as support.

nakeisha March 17 2007, 13:39:16 UTC

Ouch. Can I just say with Bob's propensity of late I was rather worried about who's death it was?

*Beams* I have to say that I am really pleased to hear you say this, in the nicest possible way, of course. I'd hoped that it would make people wonder, hence the lack of saying 'set after JiB' and Ray/Irene inferred. So I'm glad that it worked out.

I think you really cpatureed the emotion. We never see Ray at the grave but I cna imagine that would have what he was thinking.

Thank you so much. I'm really pleased to hear this. I'm glad the emotion came over for you.

aingeal8c March 17 2007, 16:06:11 UTC

*Beams* I have to say that I am really pleased to hear you say this, in the nicest possible way, of course. I'd hoped that it would make people wonder, hence the lack of saying 'set after JiB' and Ray/Irene inferred. So I'm glad that it worked out.

Yes it worked very well. I'm glad you didn't hint at too mcuh it was much more pwoerful that way. I like warnings but not too detailed ;-)

nakeisha March 18 2007, 13:04:54 UTC

Thank you.

nina_ds March 17 2007, 19:34:42 UTC

This was really nicely done. And, yup, I was snookered. I expected it to be Fraser, but I'm glad I was disappointed, because that would have been too easy. I like seeing Irene get her due in shaping Ray - thank you!

nakeisha March 18 2007, 10:01:14 UTC

Thank you very much, Nina.

I'm really pleased to hear that you also thought it was Fraser; I'm so glad that I managed to achieve that.

I'm glad that you liked seeing Irene get her part in shaping Ray's life.

Thank you.