Comments | ds_aprilfools: Deep (Prompt 24, Ray/Ray)

justbreathe80 in ds_aprilfools

Deep (Prompt 24, Ray/Ray)

Apr 20, 2007 15:24

Deep
Ray/Ray, NC-17, 721 words

( He's swallowing down Vecchio's dick, his eyes closed, and the only thing that makes sense is the soft touch of Vecchio's hands on his cheeks, the words flowing from Vecchio's mouth. )

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mickeymvt April 20 2007, 21:11:23 UTC

PORN! Ray/Ray PORN!!

My day is complete now. Thanks dahling!

justbreathe80 April 25 2007, 16:00:01 UTC

Hee! YAY!

Thanks, darling. *g*

fyrstrm April 20 2007, 22:09:09 UTC

meep. *is now a puddle of melty stuff*

justbreathe80 April 25 2007, 16:00:16 UTC

Awesome! YAY! *wins*

spuffyduds April 20 2007, 22:23:19 UTC

Holy crap. I am useless for the rest of the evening now.

Ray already knows he's going to be hoarse for the rest of the night and probably the next day too. Everyone will know he's been sucking cock when he opens his mouth to talk in the morning, and he doesn't even realize he's that close until just the thought of that makes him come in his pants, choking around Vecchio's dick in his throat.

Holy crap.

justbreathe80 April 25 2007, 16:00:37 UTC

Rendering people useless is my GOAL with porn.

YAY! *g*

phineasjones April 20 2007, 23:35:55 UTC

nrmph.

justbreathe80 April 25 2007, 16:00:49 UTC

Hee!

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qe2 April 21 2007, 15:50:47 UTC

...exactly.

justbreathe80 April 25 2007, 16:03:58 UTC

*wins*

qe2 April 28 2007, 22:50:56 UTC

Oh, no, honey - I think your READERS are the winners.

*rereads*

*slides off chair in melty hot puddle*

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