DS9 Comment Ficathon

Nov 26, 2011 11:57

Welcome to the first-ever DS9 Comment Ficathon!

This'll run as long as prompts and fills keep coming in (I'll be compiling the first masterlist next week). If you've never participated in a commentfic post, it's pretty straightforward!

To leave a prompt:1. All prompts should be left as a top-level comment to this post, not as a response to other ( Read more... )

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Spoilers for 5x06 eponymous_rose November 26 2011, 18:00:33 UTC
Jadzia Dax, 'Trials and Tribble-ations' - Sisko wasn't the only one with unfinished business aboard the original Enterprise.

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Part 1; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 lunabee34 November 27 2011, 03:44:18 UTC
Jadzia doesn't mean to disobey Benjamin, truly she doesn't, but if he gets to finagle an autograph from James Tiberius Kirk himself, she's sure as hell not missing the opportunity to say hello to Lennie. Emony kept in touch with him for awhile even after he got married, but he stopped answering her hails when things got rocky between him and Jocelyn and Audrid didn't care to resume the correspondence when she Joined with Dax.

Jadzia remembers how kind Lennie was under that gruff exterior, how funny and sarcastic, and those hands. Five hosts later and she still has dreams about those hands ( ... )

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Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 lunabee34 November 27 2011, 03:45:18 UTC
"It's Jazia actually. Emony was Dax's third host. I'm Dax's eighth. And I'm not impersonating an officer. I'm a Lieutenant Commander." Jadzia waits for the math to sink in ( ... )

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 eponymous_rose November 27 2011, 04:08:22 UTC
Eee, I loved this! ♥ (And it was just what I was fishing for with this prompt - I have such a soft spot for this pairing.) McCoy and Jadzia are just perfect, and there are so many lovely touches. "Lennie closes his eyes for a minute as if he's taking an inventory" = fantastic.

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 lunabee34 November 27 2011, 16:45:20 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked. *beams* Thank you.

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 haikitteh November 27 2011, 15:28:17 UTC
So fantastic! What a world you paint. Every detail so neatly builds the anticipation of their meeting, and then the kiss! What are these FEELINGS you made me feel?

Also, great dialogue, like my favorite line: "So Starfleet's greenlighting time travel for personal reasons now?" I can just hear DeForest Kelley grouching that one out! Lovely, lovely story. Thank you.

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 lunabee34 November 27 2011, 16:46:13 UTC
Yay! Feelings! *glee*

What awesome feedback. Thank you!

(I am in love with your icon. *admires*)

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 nenya_kanadka November 28 2011, 03:48:10 UTC
Happy squees! I love this pairing too. <3 World needs more Emony Dax and more Dax/McCoy, I always say. This is adorable and sexy!

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 lunabee34 November 28 2011, 04:11:54 UTC
*beams*

Thank you so much.

I happen to be in perfect agreement with you as far as more Dax/McCoy goes. And since Ole Miss is my alma mater, I enjoy getting to throw in those real life details that make a story more fun. :)

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 histoirede November 28 2011, 08:24:27 UTC
Loved it :)

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 lunabee34 November 29 2011, 01:15:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad. :)

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 drsquidlove November 28 2011, 13:07:29 UTC

but as the crew of this ship is in large part to blame for its creation, I think the universe can deal.

I lol'd. Nice work, and a great pairing.

S.

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Re: Part 2; Jadzia/Leonard McCoy; PG-13 lunabee34 November 29 2011, 01:15:21 UTC
Thank you so much!!

*glee*

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