With a Whimper--Chapter 1 Dazed and abused.

[amaroqwolf_inc]

Title: With a whimper
Author: Amaroqwolf_inc
Rating: pg-13.
Synopsis: When the Mutant Registration act goes into effect, things change very rapidly. And our Mutant hero's are in for some Dark Days ahead.
A/N:JudasMalfoy inspired me to write this, Each Chapter has a song for it. I will post the song and who did it at the head of each chapter so you can

Comments

[13empress]

hello. firstly, I like the premise of the story, (I like them a little plotty) and you've provided me a pretty gritty picture of what's going and best of all you've matched that emotionally with John's apathy/personal crisis - I really want to know how he survived being well, clinically dead
this could get pretty interesting - is this going to have a plot running through it or is it more focusing on survival life-as-is?
and I liked the line 'I was always one of them no matter where we were. It just took the end of the world to show us that.' hmm I could like your John lol
keep writing

[elle_rahen]

Ooooo... this has an apocalyptic feel. I love the premise and I love how you write John as so defeated yet still with a defiant edge. Looking forward to more.