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mayachain in dry_ice

Ficlet: What you make of it

Mar 13, 2009 20:47

I had this tag to An alternate Universe in 19 Scenes I wanted to write for a while. Here it is.

Title: What you make of it
Author: mayachain (ms_jvh_shuh)
Featuring: St John, Bobby, St John's Mom and five formerly captured X-kids.
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~580
Summary: When St John was very little, he would spend every morning in his mother's bed.
Note: The ( Read more... )

title: w, rating: pg, author: ms_jvh_shuh, fiction: one-shots

Comments 10

_profiterole_ March 13 2009, 23:46:06 UTC

This is so sweet! :-)

mayachain March 17 2009, 23:56:47 UTC

St John totally needs the love!

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mayachain March 17 2009, 23:57:54 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you like it. You are of course aware that this is mutual and I'm hoping to read more from you soon?

ayumie March 14 2009, 09:54:24 UTC

Awww. You made me feel all cuddly and warm now.

This is totally what should have happened.

mayachain March 17 2009, 23:58:56 UTC

This is totally what should have happened.
Stupid soldiers, it's all their fault.

Thanks for reading!

evildevilangel March 14 2009, 16:43:14 UTC

Oh! Very sweet! I absolutely loved it.

mayachain March 17 2009, 23:59:09 UTC

Yay!

sj_snugglebug March 15 2009, 05:18:26 UTC

Shmoopiness is officially my new favourite word. Yeah, it's been FOREVER since I found my way back to this community, but I figured since I read I should be polite and review.

Anyway. I love the secon-person narrative. I rarely ever read stories written like that. AND, the ending with the little kids is just too sweet. =P Brilliant work. (=

mayachain March 18 2009, 00:01:52 UTC

Schmoopiness is officially my new favourite word.
*grins*

I love the secon-person narrative.
I had it all written out in third person, then realized that the original (an Alternate universe...) is all in second person, so I figured I had better change everything... I'm glad it worked out for you!