Camping

Jun 06, 2008 00:09

Title: Camping
Author: Me
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Bobby/John ish
Summary: Bobby+John+a small tent = a 200 word drabble about how the boys deal with being crammed together in a tent that is too small for them.

“You kick me, and I’ll kick you back.” Bobby warned as John moved restlessly in his sleeping bag, burrowing away from the cool night air. The tent ( Read more... )

author: raitear

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babydracky June 6 2008, 09:15:11 UTC
This is so cute^^

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raitear June 6 2008, 22:25:48 UTC
thank you.

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openedbook June 6 2008, 10:42:32 UTC
D'awww. What a great way to start my day!

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raitear June 6 2008, 22:26:03 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it.

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_profiterole_ June 6 2008, 10:45:18 UTC
No tent is too small for Bobby and John. XDDD

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raitear June 6 2008, 22:26:33 UTC
heh, my thoughts exactly.

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dark0feenix June 6 2008, 11:51:08 UTC
Awww! Fun and lovely.

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raitear June 6 2008, 22:26:41 UTC
thank you.

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talktooloose June 6 2008, 13:53:38 UTC
Oh so nice. Thank you. I'm interested in the fact that, though it's Bobby POV, the smile line would, realistically be John's. To me, that means it's Bobby sense that he smiled. Almost psychic.

UNREQUESTED BETA:

- "Bobby held his BREATH" not "breathe"
- There's no good reason for the line of asterisks. Neither time nor POV changes.

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raitear June 6 2008, 22:28:45 UTC
The smile was kind of John's, and Bobby probably would know it. Thank you, I fixed those little parts.

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