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Fic: fight for it

Mar 29, 2008 01:52

Title: Fight For It (3/18 ( Read more... )

title: f, rating: pg, fiction: series

Comments 13

acyid March 29 2008, 07:52:40 UTC

Aw...poor mistreated angsting Bobby :)

gala_apples March 29 2008, 20:35:33 UTC

my bobby is definately a bit emo. but in this case it's with good reason. <333 him.

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gala_apples March 29 2008, 20:49:19 UTC

that's pretty much how bobby feels. though he can't admit it. undefinable, indeed.

looking through the chapters i've written, he doesn't have much interaction with anyone. he's into his own head a lot. but they're definately friends. in my mind, he was the first one to welcome john back into the academy a day later.

thanks! when i write i tend to focus on charecters, not plot. so to say my charecterisation is good, is a really good compliment for me.

ayumie March 29 2008, 11:05:27 UTC

I've been meaning to comment on the first parts, because I'm really enjoying this fic. I can't wait for John and Bobby to get together, though. Because they are getting together, right? Right?!

gala_apples March 29 2008, 20:51:24 UTC

i'm glad you're enjoying it. *evil grin* i'm not saying nuthin! name rank and serial number is all you get!

twighlightr March 29 2008, 11:07:35 UTC

So much angst in one chapter i love it :) x

gala_apples March 29 2008, 20:52:26 UTC

oh, then you'll like later chapters. heh, bobby's chock-full of drama. (in a manly way, of course. bobby's all man when he's pouting)

train_diskense March 29 2008, 12:37:56 UTC

......It's completely irrational but with this one thing, Bobby being removed from his room in order to get this new character comfortable, I have begun to hate him. Rory. Probably because I'm seeing it from Bobby's POV and I'm upset for him as I know what it's like to be forced from a position you've been in forever to be replaced by a new person. And he's not going to be near John anymore.

Also, yeah, no JohnBobby interaction so far. Curious if there's a reason for that or not.

gala_apples March 29 2008, 20:57:20 UTC

sorry that happened to you in real life. being the replaced person definately sucks, i also know from experience. bobby's not happy, and rory doesn't make life easier in the next chapter.

John& Bobby hasn't happened because it's sort of an implied friendship. at least for the first few chapters, later chapters are drama-laden for the two.

thanks for commenting!