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mayachain in dry_ice

Fic: Prodigal Son

Jul 01, 2007 15:21

There's an advanced math class, listlessly stabbing at pieces of cake, morose and teacherless.

There's a stack of newspapers, piled up on an otherwise abandoned table in a dining hall, getting another day's edition tossed dejectedly on top of it.

There's a folded page torn out of a newpaper, stuck inside a faded jeans' back pocket.

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St John is ( Read more... )

title: p, rating: pg, author: ms_jvh_shuh, fiction: series

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mayachain July 2 2007, 13:25:22 UTC

*is feeling all loved*
Thanks you!

ayumie July 1 2007, 16:22:03 UTC

I don't think I've commented on this series so far. Which is strange, because I really like it. Especially the unusual dynamic between Scott and St.John. I'm looking forward to the next part!

mayachain July 2 2007, 13:26:44 UTC

Thank you!
(sighs at notes for the reunion)

lux_apollo July 1 2007, 18:32:28 UTC

Much love!

Although you could have cut it here, I hope you continue with this because your characterizations of Scott and John were excellent here. :-)

mayachain July 2 2007, 13:27:52 UTC

Thanks!
Well, I want to at least wrap it up with some kind of reunion scene :)

tanyasassysweet July 1 2007, 19:17:13 UTC

This is really good!! I cant wait for you to put up more!! "No-one's ever wanted me back before." that was sooo good!! i love this fic.

mayachain July 2 2007, 13:28:56 UTC

Thank you!
Oh yes, John needs to feel wanted.

talktooloose July 1 2007, 21:47:34 UTC

The image of a broken Scott striving to reach out and help is beautiful and touching. Up to and including his trusting Pyro with the car.

The opening letters were a masterstroke and the atmosphere of both the school and the town square were very vivid.

Well done.

mayachain July 2 2007, 13:35:08 UTC

Now we know why, in X2, Pyro immediately went for the driver's seat :)

I'm glad you approve!