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Spiral: Chapter 10

Aug 04, 2006 10:59

Title: Spiral
Author: lux_apollo
Rating: R for language.
Pairings: Bobby/John
Summary: The tension builds towards disaster. Bobby and Justin are at MIT. They share a moment. Justin has a vision. John drives the Brotherhood to the mission location and gets lectured by Magneto. Justin wakes up. Bobby and Justin set out to prevent a disaster from happening.

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rating: r, author: lux_apollo, title: s, fiction: series

Comments 22

divided_poet August 4 2006, 15:35:04 UTC

Oh, wow! Oh, my god! I must know what happens next! Please!
That was a great chapter, and John...
I can't wait for more. *g*

lux_apollo August 4 2006, 17:49:01 UTC

Don't worry. You only have to wait until Monday. I'm giving two chapters this week because I know this one was a cliffhanger. I considered posting 11 too at first, but...

*shrugs*

What can I say? I enjoy torturing creating anticipation in my audience.

ayumie August 4 2006, 16:08:18 UTC

OMG, cliffhanger! I need to know what happens next. Great chapter, btw.

lux_apollo August 4 2006, 17:49:29 UTC

Thanks!

You'll find out on Monday.

train_diskense August 4 2006, 23:00:41 UTC

Is it wrong that I actually wouldn't mind Justin and Bobby having a *coughs* relationship? *shifty eyes*

^-^ I loved this chapter so very very much. And you.

POor Bobby. *shakes head* Always ending up in such sticky situations.

lux_apollo August 5 2006, 03:39:52 UTC

Oh yes, always. Poor Bobby.

Well, I wouldn't say it's wrong... but damn, slashing the non-pairing when one is an OC? Heh, I just couldn't do that. Justin is a good guy at heart, but he's not right for Bobby. They might have a good go at a relationship, but I don't think it could last. There are logical reasons why this chapter had a bit of pseudo-Bobby/Justin, though.

If you want to know, just ask... though I can't talk about everything yet, I think.

Breath Taking crazystar662 August 5 2006, 00:51:47 UTC

This series is amazing. I could barely breathe while I was reading this chapter. I am DYING 2 c what happens in the next chapter.

Re: Breath Taking lux_apollo August 5 2006, 03:30:20 UTC

Wow! I'm glad I'm making it worthwhile for you. Thanks for reading!

fays August 5 2006, 03:07:35 UTC

GAWD! YOU TEASE!!!! Although this chapter made my day so I suppose I can't be too made. Anyway your doing a fabulous job, seriously Justin makes me squirm with joy!

lux_apollo August 5 2006, 03:28:45 UTC

Thanks! I'm sorry I'm being a tease this week... I hate cliffhangers as much as anyone else!