Phonecall

Nov 17, 2005 18:23

Title: Phonecall (1/6)
Pairing: Bobby/John
Word Count: 182
Rating: G
Author's Notes: A phonecall during the Easter Break. Pre-X2, written as an actual transcript (how real speech appears written down.

This is the first in a series of short fics, basically drabbles, based on metods of communication. Not much will happen in each fanfiction, it’s just a way of me showing how many different ways everyone communicates and also a few of the factors of Bobby and John’s relationship.

I’m planning to do a conversation over the phone, an MSN convo, letters, notes stuck on the board, emails and text messages but obviously, if you think that this one is rubbish, I won’t carry on so please tell ne what you thing.

J - John
B - Bobby
(.) - Taking a breath
... - Break/pause
Underlined - Overlapping speech

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J: ....hello?
B: Uh...erm...hi Johnny (.) um...it’s Bobby
J: Oh (.) Hey Bobby...what’s up?
B: Um...I (.) just wanted to er...see...er..how your break was, that’s all
J: Oh...it’s um...alright I guess...erm...how’re your (.) your family
B: ...that’s kinda um...kinda why I rang...
J: (.) Oh?
B: ...I’m um...real bored...they don’t t-talk about anythin’ interesting really...
J: Mmmm
B: I mean...um...like anything that (.) anything that could be ...er contreversial or um...risky, they won’t talk about...
J: Oh...erm how do they feel (.) feel about you then? You know...erm...
B: ....
J: (.)
B: ....they don’t (.) they don’t know.
J: Oh.
B: So...um...yeah
J: Yeah
B: Um...I miss...er (.) I miss you.
J: Yeah...that’s real (.) real cute
B: No..I..(.) erm..I mean it.
J: Oh...(.)
B: ...
J: I m-miss you too...(.)
B: Yeah?
J: Yeah.
B: Well...erm...I g-guess I better (.) better go
J: ...cool
B: ...erm..Johnny?
J: (.) Yeah?
B: um...I...um...iloveyou
J: iknow
B: ....
J: (.) Bobby?
B: ...uh
J: Ditto...
B: ....um...thanks
J: Bye...guess...I (.) guess I’ll um...see you soon
B: Yeah...bye um bye John
J: (.) ...bye

rating: g, title: p, author: _cland3st1n3, fiction: series

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