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Episode One-Whatsername-Part One

Jul 21, 2008 13:08

Prelude

Whatsername-Part One

Both hearts beat with trepidation as the TARDIS materialized in Cardiff. His mouth was dry and he felt just the slightest bit of moisture on his forehead. He smiled as he opened up the power cells before he stepped outside, most untimelordlike sweating is. He yanked open the doors and looked back to the console. He ( Read more... )

part one, whatsername, episode one, unfinished symphony

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fey_spirit August 22 2008, 02:45:09 UTC

::Really Confused:: You brought Donna back, but you don't seem to like her...

usmc75 August 22 2008, 02:55:14 UTC

Well my personal feelings on Donna aren't really the point. It is a story and I am writing the character I saw on TV. I happen to like Donna a lot and I think that shows if one reads my work.

fey_spirit August 23 2008, 05:33:54 UTC

It's not the way you write Donna, it's the way everyone else reacts to her... even the Doctor seems kind of standdoffish. And I've never seen Jack disrespect any woman the way you had him disrespect her (even if only in his mind.)

usmc75 August 23 2008, 05:47:18 UTC

Did you read the rest of the story? There are reasons they are all acting that way.

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