AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!! YOU CANNOT *LEAVE* IT THERE!!!!!!!! arrrrrrrrrgh!!
*ahen* Well done.
LOVE the Trickster's Brigade thing - all the pieces fall into place! It all fits! Love tying in "Whatever Happened to Sarah Jane" - FANTASTIC!!!!!
Typos/errors:
Ianto was wondering who she was thought was going to get in her way.
Need to get rid of a "Was" there.
Ianto closed the channel and tried not to think about it. The world would end when it ended. Worrying about it won't make it any easier.
Last sentence should probably be "wouldn't make it" to agree with the rest.
Also, you have "Trickster's" everywhere as a plural - should be Trickster or Tricksters. (It's The Trickster's Brigade because it's the Brigade of The Trickster.)
Thanks, I have been leading towards this, hoping it is all making sense. Thanks for the typos, I think I might owe you a real Christmas present this year :)
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*ahen* Well done.
LOVE the Trickster's Brigade thing - all the pieces fall into place! It all fits! Love tying in "Whatever Happened to Sarah Jane" - FANTASTIC!!!!!
Typos/errors:
Ianto was wondering who she was thought was going to get in her way.
Need to get rid of a "Was" there.
Ianto closed the channel and tried not to think about it. The world would end when it ended. Worrying about it won't make it any easier.
Last sentence should probably be "wouldn't make it" to agree with the rest.
Also, you have "Trickster's" everywhere as a plural - should be Trickster or Tricksters. (It's The Trickster's Brigade because it's the Brigade of The Trickster.)
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Thanks, I have been leading towards this, hoping it is all making sense. Thanks for the typos, I think I might owe you a real Christmas present this year :)
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