Original Ficlet: "The Door"

Mar 05, 2007 14:40

Title: The Door
Author: drusillas_rain
Story Notes: PG-13, 492 words
Summary: Shelly and her brother Luke discover a strange door in the attic. Thirty years later, it still calls out to her ( Read more... )

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luci0logy March 5 2007, 21:26:31 UTC
Oooh! I need to know more: where were the dead boys found? Has any other family ever mentioned the door? Will she go through the door?

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drusillas_rain March 7 2007, 02:38:19 UTC
eeeee! you liked it ^_^

I'm so glad all of those questions came through. I was trying to create a story where the reader could believe in both/either possibility.

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luci0logy March 7 2007, 02:56:06 UTC
I did wonder if the door was like a metaphor for her brother's disappearance, but I like the idea that it only opens at certain times better.

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drusillas_rain March 7 2007, 03:06:25 UTC
hehe, it could be. She was very young at the time. Or it could be like fairies - adults can't see them, but children can *cue creepy music*

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enchanted_jae March 6 2007, 08:30:47 UTC
Oooh, that gave me chills!

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drusillas_rain March 7 2007, 02:39:19 UTC
*grin* yay!

heh, do you ever get the feeling that it's a bit wrong to give your readers chills/tears/whatever emotion they comment with, but dance with glee anyway :)

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luci0logy March 7 2007, 02:57:25 UTC
God no! Because the intent has worked.

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drusillas_rain March 7 2007, 03:10:05 UTC
see, with you guys I get that. But sometimes new authors that I've commented on have replied back with "uh, sure."

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